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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AH hahahahaha The last bit of this made me giggle like crazy xD "Spirit no pee on me!"
Good story would be hilarious if there were more ^^
Still though it made me laugh all the way at the end great job!
Sp~
Good story would be hilarious if there were more ^^
Still though it made me laugh all the way at the end great job!
Sp~
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved Nature Nurtures. The whole concept was great. Spirit was so cute! There is nothing like helping a little kitsune in heat. I also loved the walking tree's voice. The ending was quite hilarious. I hope Mr Walking Tree doesn't wear Spirit out too much. I would love to see another oneshot with these two one day.
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a very cute story, and very well done. I enjoy the Tree-spirit not understanding anything, and you left nothing out. Actually, it would be nice if you'll decide to keep this story up and write about Spirit and Plantman interaction, they sound like a lovely pair.
The sex scenes were also very good. :)
The sex scenes were also very good. :)
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Giggling Insanely* Okay I think I enjoyed that way too much and not for the parts your probably thinking. The sex was very hot and extremly well done, major props for that. It can't be easy writing a sex scene when one of the people involved doesn't even know what sex is. But I have to say the part that was most enjoyable to me was when Spirit and Flower were actually talking with each other. It was just so cute and I was laughing so hard. Especially when Flower just keeps going on about the "buttsex." It's your falt Spirit, you taught him the word. I also liked their quips about the pee. I was almost falling out of my chair at that point.
So, great fic, it was long but highly entertaining and the writing itself was well done as was the emotions and Flower's curiosity actually felt tangible, which to me is pretty incredible. I hope you write more with Spirit and Flower, they are just golden in my book. Thanks for the great, hilarious read!
So, great fic, it was long but highly entertaining and the writing itself was well done as was the emotions and Flower's curiosity actually felt tangible, which to me is pretty incredible. I hope you write more with Spirit and Flower, they are just golden in my book. Thanks for the great, hilarious read!
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG are you really going to continue this story!!! YAY!! or are you just posting it her?? Cuz that would suck XD I've wanted you to continue with this for AGES!!! Oh, hows your dad??? better???