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for Nature Nutures

by MadMaxxCoyote

person Baron
schedule August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think I've fallen in love with you. This enjoyed this story far to much, the best part being Flower torturing the hell out of Spirit and not knowing it. I find his point of view awesome and their relationship troublesome, but cute. I wish you'd write more about them, but I think that this story ending perfectly on it's on. I like to think you so many for writing this.

I kind of feel sad for Flower being stuck with Spirit for the rest of his life. Not that his life won't be probably 100% more surprising and frustrating, but Spirit will probably drive a less calmer being crazy. At least he's helpful, not sweet as a cupcake, but what else do you expect from a tree spirit? He's helpful and nice enough to help Spirit with his 'problem', truly Spirit got a good bargain in the end. I kind of wish Flower had took him a few more times.

The sex was hot too by the way. Can't wait for your next story.
person This is cool . . .
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is cool. It's so funny, too. Are you going to add more? Then we can see how 'troublesome' this gets to be.
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hahaha this is soo funny. XD I love it. Interesting
person lynngreg
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Thank you for writing it.
person Peya Luna
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!! that was hands down the most hilarious slash i´ve ever read! poor plant-creature, he/it only wanted to help, and now ends up with a non-stop-talking, horny, peeing-against-trees kitsune as mate...and with all the seed he keeps on swallowing i wonder if they will have bushy-tailed sprigs someday LOLOL i mean technically/botanically all plants are hermaphroditic!
person freefal1310
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that's just epic! 'deflowered by a plant' lol:D you've just made my day=) more!^^
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*loves* ...and the reaction from the others, I imagine, would be frickin epic
person Zoshia
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say I loved it! Your flower man was great! I hope you are considering a sequel!
person daveb
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing.
person Anon
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was really cool. Honestly, I can't think of another story type where one character is having sex without knowing what sex is, and then simultaneously being basically unaffected by the act. Spirit is lucky the tree guy has seen others do it, and that he has decent powers of deduction. I would like to see more, if possible!