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May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
that was really creative.
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May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fricking love this couple
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April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i really wish there was a full story to this not only is it unique but it was funny as hell :)
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May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was awesomely funny and sexy! I would love to see more of this story, like the homecoming? dencoming? to see how they got on. hehe tree sex *giggle* brings a whole knew meaning to getting wood wow that was such a bad joke lol
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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was actually a very cute story. I dont know if you are even still on this site but your other story, the one about brett? was very good also. I really hope you continue that story. I love how you described nature and how they comunitcated with each other. that was a really neat description.
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! I love how the plant guy doesn't really know what's going on, but is smart enough to help, regardless of his ignorance. Although this fic makes me guilty for being part of the human race.....nothing new, I guess.
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March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL THAT WAS PRETTY HOT~AND FUNNY!!!BUTTSEX!!! LOL
PEE-POLICE?! AWESOME. I THINK YOU CAN GET A SEQUEL OUT OF THIS!!
PEE-POLICE?! AWESOME. I THINK YOU CAN GET A SEQUEL OUT OF THIS!!
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! I've reread it tons of times, and it's always just as good as I remember. ^.^ I think that I possibly have left a review for this before, but it would have been at least a few months ago if I did, and so I figured that I would leave another one regardless.
Spirit is so adorable, especially when he freaks out about being mounted! And the forest spirit is awesome, especially with how he is trying to figure everything about sex out technically, and doesn't realize that it's meant to cause pleasure. Of course, that makes sense, as he is a plant... Lucky for Spirit that the forest spirit saw those two men before! =]
Oh, by the way, you probably realize this already, but you left an r out of Nurtures in the title. Or you might have meant to write it that way... Sorry, I'm very grammatically picky, and I don't mean to be offensive when I say that. ^^'
I do like the way that you wrote the story, switching the POV between the two. It makes the story what it is, and the story wouldn't be the same without the forest spirit's POV. ^.^
Okay, well, hopefully this review isn't too terribly all over the place. I always feel like my reviews are, but I leave them anyway, because I know that it's always good to get feedback from readers. :)
Wow, I've managed to use three different variations of the smiley face emoticon-thing. Can I find another way? Why yes, yes I can! ^^
Sorry, that was completely and totally random. ^_^
Spirit is so adorable, especially when he freaks out about being mounted! And the forest spirit is awesome, especially with how he is trying to figure everything about sex out technically, and doesn't realize that it's meant to cause pleasure. Of course, that makes sense, as he is a plant... Lucky for Spirit that the forest spirit saw those two men before! =]
Oh, by the way, you probably realize this already, but you left an r out of Nurtures in the title. Or you might have meant to write it that way... Sorry, I'm very grammatically picky, and I don't mean to be offensive when I say that. ^^'
I do like the way that you wrote the story, switching the POV between the two. It makes the story what it is, and the story wouldn't be the same without the forest spirit's POV. ^.^
Okay, well, hopefully this review isn't too terribly all over the place. I always feel like my reviews are, but I leave them anyway, because I know that it's always good to get feedback from readers. :)
Wow, I've managed to use three different variations of the smiley face emoticon-thing. Can I find another way? Why yes, yes I can! ^^
Sorry, that was completely and totally random. ^_^
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
P.S. Sorry, I forgot to mention this, because I'm insane sometimes ^^', but it would be really amazing if you continued this! Or wrote more one-shots with Forest Spirit/Spirit. They're so awkwardly cute together! Oh, and I should also mention that I love how Spirit pretty much forces/manipulates the forest spirit into becoming his mate (although everyone knows that it probably didn't take *too* much coercion on Spirit's part XD.)
The pee bit= Priceless, because so many authors focus so heavily on the smex that they forget any other parts of the story. You most definitely did not. And the same goes for the part where Spirit freaks out because he has been mounted; he needs the forest spirit to stay with him as his mate so that no other kitsune will force him to become *their* mate. That part made the characters even more real than ever, because it showed that they did in fact have lives, and faced problems, and that sex wouldn't solve everything. They will probably have to work at their relationship, too, as they are of two completely different races. And it may not solve all of their problems, but at least they will have very much buttsex! XD
And yeah, I'll possibly think of other random things that I wanted to say, and will leave another review if I do. Sorry if it's annoying that I can't remember everything that I want to say at once! ^^'
The pee bit= Priceless, because so many authors focus so heavily on the smex that they forget any other parts of the story. You most definitely did not. And the same goes for the part where Spirit freaks out because he has been mounted; he needs the forest spirit to stay with him as his mate so that no other kitsune will force him to become *their* mate. That part made the characters even more real than ever, because it showed that they did in fact have lives, and faced problems, and that sex wouldn't solve everything. They will probably have to work at their relationship, too, as they are of two completely different races. And it may not solve all of their problems, but at least they will have very much buttsex! XD
And yeah, I'll possibly think of other random things that I wanted to say, and will leave another review if I do. Sorry if it's annoying that I can't remember everything that I want to say at once! ^^'
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved this story so much. A cute kitsune uke getting fucked repeatedly aside(I love massive rounds of sex. Yum. Uh. Ahem)Spirit and Flower are cool, I wish you could make this a continuation. I love Flower especially his thought process is intriging. Love Kitty