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schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet way to end a sweet story! Happily ever after! Good story; I look forward to reading more from you guys! Happy Hanukkah, Merry X-Mas and Happy Kwanza! lol
person Mikken05
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just got done reading your story from chapter one of Volume 1 all they way till now, and I really love it :) I actually didn't read it before when I saw it on the site because I thought it was a Yuri story (not that there's anything wrong with Yuri stories, just not a fan), I don't know why, though, since all I had to do was look a little bit farther down to see that it wasn't :P

Oh well, I'm glad I read it now, and I can't wait to see what else happens to these two, which I'm hoping that's what the question mark in the chapter title meant.
person kylee123
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story is coming along very nicely. I really enjoyed the speed dating in chapter 4. I am so glad that Reita finally got to talk to Maika. I did miss the makeup sex scene in chapter 6 but the chapter was still great. I hope that Reita will be able to resolve his family issues before they get married. It would be hard for Maika to marry into that kind of mess. Especially Reita's birth certificate. Reita's dad has been manipulating his mother all this time. Reita needs to let her know that he is a boy. It will not be healthy for him to continue that deception. Anyway I love the way the story is going. I am eager for the next chapter and the wedding eventually.
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, they both have such fucked up families! To think you're little boy is a girl and to dress him and treat him like a girl is cruel. Think of all the psychotherapy they'll both need! Hahaha


So, all is forgiven, they'll get married, adopt babies and live happily ever after......nice happy ending!
person kylee123
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I can't believe I am behind by so many chapters. My laptop computer is dying. I will read and review tonight.
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh booo not enough smut *looks at the pc monitor with an unhappy pout* I want moooooaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrr!!! *sigh*
soooooo...... when's volume 3 coming out? *eyes Crystal and Emma expectantly* like, tomorrow... right? right?
you will not leave us eager readers hanging, right? not if you wanna grow old and hv grandchildren! *gives Emma and Crystal an evil grin*
cause this wasn't near enough to satisfy our boys love addiction so unless you enjoy torture you better bot bail on us... cause we will follow! XDD
UP.DA.TE.SOON............
ps: good job girls and good luck with your finals ^_~
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If it wouldn't have been for the asking to review, I'd have gladly done it earlier, because I find your work really interesting.
This chapter was really fun to read, because it revealed a lot of things I was earlier pondering about - for example if they will actually marry or just stay together as they are at the end.
But seeing that the chapter's title was with the question mark, I'd allow myself to give a wild guess that there will be someone interfering with their relationship. Hmmm...if it'd really happen that way, I'm already getting curious to see who it'll be and what the person will do ^^
Tho this chapter picked up my curiosity about Reita's brother, I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of person he is more in depth (:

Great job, as always you two ^.^

~ Lex-Lee
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maika was kinda quick to forgive Reita, no? (or maybe I'm just being mean, I know I woulda made him grovel a little, well a lot, more! ^^)
but I'm happy they're together again. is there smut coming this way? please? pretty please? *looks at Emma & Crystal with puppy dog eyes*
update soon
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maika's gotta give Reita another chance; after all, he went thru so much trouble switching clothes for the speed dating farce! Hahah
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Funny how Maika didn't put two and two together quicker! (with all the guys that came in and pretty much told his and Reita's story!)

I hope Reita catches up w/him and gets forgiveness.