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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a powerful and insightful chapter. Now I know what drives Ty; well some reasons anyway. I am confused tho: did the "agency" for lack of a better word, the people who did all those tests when Ty was younger, did they get his mom fired from her jobs? Is that why she began drinking? Where was his father?
At the beginning I thought the little boy (Ty) had OCD or a mild case of autism. I was surprised that he wasn't diagnosed w/either.
It must be terrible to have the ability to read people's minds; your mind can never shut off.
Anyway, great chapter and I look forward to the next!
At the beginning I thought the little boy (Ty) had OCD or a mild case of autism. I was surprised that he wasn't diagnosed w/either.
It must be terrible to have the ability to read people's minds; your mind can never shut off.
Anyway, great chapter and I look forward to the next!
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So at first I thought Ty was a good guy; now I know he's not! lol Great story, very interesting. I'm left wondering why Ty is doing all this, why he killed the mob guy, why he downloaded stuff from the college kid's computer, and why he was there to begin with; 4 hrs. away from home? I'm really curious now! Great job!
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like how you stick in a Harry Potter reference in the end! This is really good. Did the guy on the ledge kill the guy in the street? Did the guy on the ledge work for the mob? Oh, so many questions! Can't wait for an update!