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Jesus! I was at the edge of my seat reading this! OMG, are they gonna be ok? Who's the baby? Why do they need to kidnap her? OMG, great chapter; hurry up and update!!!!!!

Well, it seems like I go away over the weekend and miss tons of chapters!!!!! I had to play catch up for awhile! I'm really enjoying the closeness between Ty and Aiden. Ty was so cute, finally realizing he has a friend! I also really enjoyed reading about Aiden's ability; it;s very interesting.

I'm anxious about this next assignment tho; I hope they're not in any danger.....

iam really starting to get into this story. please keep up the good work.

Sorry Kiddo your efforts to use mind control to make me review doesn't work, simply because I already liked your story... already, already! LOL

I liked the way you slowly built the story from the loners Ty's perspective in beginning, he was so totally inhumanly cool, detached, and unemotional, its just like a real spy or uncover operative would act, but for an uncontroled mindreader, who picks up many stray thoughts from a multitude of individuals... it would be down right necessary, to be so completely utterly unemotional, detached, and isolated to function.

Also I like the way your slowly building the sarcastic feuding friendship and trust between Ty and Aiden... with only casual flirtation from the less alienated Aiden, its very likely Aiden saw in the future how the emotional deficient Ty would react initially to his sexual invitation. The more your story continues the more human Ty actually becomes. Surely your lovely boys will get busy in bed very soon, LOL!

Sincerely Gslinger,...I...am...not...programed...to...review...but...I...want...more...story
...NOW!

PS Me thinks, the Company Lady planned it all a long, she made sure the lonely Ty would be well-feed and healthy, more ways than one!

Nice chapter. The work Ty did seemed pretty easy. But why did he have to get a hotel room?

Also, the format is a little hard to read. Sometimes I'm not sure if Ty is speaking, or if it's Aiden. Instead using a line for each character when they speak, you use a few lines or a paragraph, but both characters are speaking. It gets a little confusing.

I do like how Ty and Aiden seem to be getting along, tho. I know I mentioned that before! Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

This is getting to be such an interesting story! I really like the banter between Ty and Aiden. I think having Aiden around will help Ty try to rest his mind. I can't imagine every time I went out, I would hear what people were thinking. And Aiden, seeing the future; I definitely WOULD NOT like that!

So, it's good that Ty has to babysit Aiden and keep an eye on him. It'll help Ty in the long run.

Ahhh, two chapters in one day! Yay! I liked this chapter. I'm wondering why Ty has to babysit. It's interesting putting these two guys together; one can read minds and one can see the future. They could probably work on cases together....

A good start. Though there are several spelling and grammatical errors throughout, I found the main character and plot to be intriguing enough to hold my attention, and I'll be looking forward to future chapters :D

Well, that certainly makes sense for Ty having to eat so much! I didn't realize that mindreading burns so many calories! l

Does Ty have a conscience? I know the people he's offing are bad (they all are, right?), but still, he doesn't feel bad about him killing them?

So, he's been working for this "company" since he was little? Since his mom sort of gave him to these people?

Wow, this chapter was good! Ty is such a badass! But how can he get inside the minds of his victims? So, he's not as bad as I originally thought. Ty's killing bad people and killing them for the good of the world. He's killing people who work w/terrorists and such. So Ty's doing a good thing....