rate_review Reviews

Hey, I stumbled upon this story today, and I love it!! Of course the ideas of mind-reading and being able to tell the future aren't completely original, but the way that you frame these talents is. I enjoy the way you write Ty. It allows the readers to see how detached and confused and horribly maladjusted he is. :D I can't wait to see what your amazing mind comes up with next!!!

Wow, thought you totally abandoned this story! I had to re-read the last few chapters to refamiliarize myself w/the characters!

So....Ty and Aiden are at a con; I just finished reading a story about cons!

Looking forward to the next chapter as they closer and closer to finding that little girl.

So when I first started to read this, I was a little confused and not sure if I wanted to continue. I realize now that if I had not continued, part of my life would be incomplete. : ] Your story is amazing and beautiful. I love Ty and Aiden so very much. I want to find out about the girl and the future war. Ah, so much I love about your story.

Was Ty writing all this stuff down about the kidnapped girl in the hopes of trying to find out why They (the company) wanted to kidnap her? OMG, does SHE have special powers? Is Ty trying to figure out when this "war" is going to take place? Is he trying to prevent it?

Oh God! I thought they were really killing people at the beginning! Jeez, you set that up so well, with them hiding and getting around the lasers, etc. It was so realistic!

Great chapter! Love the dates! Love the rules! So funny! Love switching all the Harry Potter books to another section! Love putting Twilight by the Bibles! Hahah, so funny!

Now for the serious review: poor Ty! Getting in the mind of Durgin (was that it? Sorry, I forgot his name already! And I just finished reading his name! Oh well) Some bad memories, what were they from? Rape? I couldn't figure it out.

I'm so glad they finally got together! Aiden was pretty smart warming up Ty beforehand in the shower! lol

I totally see Aiden being fun and playful between the sheets! He defnitely wouldn't be serious in bed; he's not serious out of bed!

OMG, Aiden is priceless! The things he comes up with! His thinking! Priceless! Totally screwing w/whatever Ty thought to be the way the world works! So funny.

And Ty, so nonchalantly agreeing w/him! Great chapter! Oh, there were a couple of errors I noticed: desert is the desert, like in Palm Springs, dessert is the stuff you have after dinner. Also, I noticed that when you write the word wont, you never put an apostrophe. It's a contraction and should be written won't. Anyway, no biggies, just thought I'd point them out.

I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out all the other things Aiden knows that will be new for Ty! lol

Ok, I caught up on all the chapters late last night but couldn't review b/c my typing was keeping my homophobic b/f awake! So....I'm ready now!

Great few chapters! I was on pins and needles when Ty fell down those stairs! How come Aiden and Cheryl didn't find it necessary to bring Ty to the hospital to get checked out?

I'm glad that Ty and Aiden made up. I was confused a little in the last chapter b/c I thought Aiden was gay b/c he kept hitting on Ty. So, I was surprised that he was watching straight porn! lol

So, Aiden's vision is pretty scary. Especially b/c their company is the one behind the war he sees. So how do they fit into this war? Are they the key catalysts of the war? Is their company setting them up?

This is such a great story! I love stories w/intrigue and mystery! It's like reading Dan Brown but w/porn! And not just any porn; gay porn! Hahaha

You made my weekend with the fast updates. Tha
ks! Fleshing out characters and revealing a believable plot
can be hard to do, but you have succeeded in these
last three chapters. You go girl!!