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for The Time is up (working title)

by madlodger

schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay you got me interested. I look forward to reading more and good luck with your goal.
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, albeit a little slow moving. Hopefully things will speed up a little bit! I think your story is very promising. I also like how you're hiding some things in the first chapter; this absolutely piques my interest. Looking forward to your next update!
person miles
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems promising ! Waiting for more...