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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ne encanto la historia y como se fue desarrollando, al final los dos protagonistas terminaron con diferentes parejas aunque Rian'D su actual compañero no me convence, pero Kel metió la pata, tratar de seducirlo como a cualquiera de sus conquistas, mal muy mal ahora paga sus errores
Me sorprendió el desenlace la manera en como planificaron todo, y es increíble pero el nuevo rey fue muy inesperado, ahora solo me queda esperar por la continuación
Saludos (=3
Me sorprendió el desenlace la manera en como planificaron todo, y es increíble pero el nuevo rey fue muy inesperado, ahora solo me queda esperar por la continuación
Saludos (=3
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November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i found this chapter to be very informative and well thought out. Loved all the background info we have on what i assume will be two of the main characters. I look forward to the rest of the story.
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October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It was an enjoyable story to read.
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May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1. Yaoi/Slash M-Preg please! I love reading what writers can come up with depending on what genre and category they're good with and will to give a first try at. Go for it! I wonder if anyone else has voiced their thoughts?
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February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was great!!! I really like this story!!! I can't wait to see what happend to the knights!!!! And I want to see some more magic from Rian!!! See you soon!!!
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chappie!!! This seems to get to be a difficult life for Rian it seems everyone wants him ^^ pour guy to cute for his own good!!! See you again soon!!
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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I read this. It's a wonderful story.
Great characters, strong plot, excellent writing.
However, I have to tell you the name D'rian makes me think of
B-RAD from Malibu Most Wanted. I had few laughing fits from that.
And I'm not criticizing the name at all, it's lovely, it was just
my brain making a really random connection.
Please continue to write. I should take part in NaNoWriMo myself one these days.
~WR
Great characters, strong plot, excellent writing.
However, I have to tell you the name D'rian makes me think of
B-RAD from Malibu Most Wanted. I had few laughing fits from that.
And I'm not criticizing the name at all, it's lovely, it was just
my brain making a really random connection.
Please continue to write. I should take part in NaNoWriMo myself one these days.
~WR
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much! And it's cute that D'rian has a crush on Kelian, but I still like D'rian and Asahi best. >_> But that's just me...
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! Really would like to hear from Rian the next chappie I want to know how he reacts to the kiss ^^ And as pairings I'd like both Rian X Val and Rian X Aahi ^^ See you next time!!!!
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very intriguing story line. This story is very well written and the characters make you want to find out what happens next. Please keep up the good work.