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by Kiira

person kylee123
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Syran did get sweet revenge against Jaromir. So cute! I think Syran was smart to torture Jaromir a little. It will make Jaromir think twice before dissing Syran again. I hope they get to kiss and make up now. Nothing says loving like a snowstorm outside :-)
person kylee123
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I am so glad that Syran managed to escape without having to put out for the guard. I was a little sorry for the poor brute. I am sorry for Syran because Jaromir is breaking his heart. It is hard to be rejected by the person that you are falling in love with. I know Jaromir does not want to become attached to Syran but fate is definitely throwing them together again and again. Maybe their snuggling will warm up Jaromir's heart a little. I hope they will kiss and make up at least for a little while.
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter. I am glad they managed to escape.
person kylee
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for the new chapter! I have to laugh when I think of Syran trying to take on Aimo the guard. I just hope he can get away without getting raped in the process. It is hilarious how Jaromir and Syran seem to be unable to keep away from each other. If only Jaromir would soften up and realize that he actually wants Syran. I loved the cuddling scene. It was nice to see Syran giving comfort to Jaromir in his weak moment.
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the Christmas chapter. Lets hope they will really have such a happy time in the future.
person kylee123
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I loved their sex scene. Very hot. Very well done. I am glad that Jaromir managed to save Syran before any of the other soldiers could molest him. It was a big deal since Jaromir is not used to killing so easily. It is too bad that they parted on bad terms but I am sure that Syran will be on Jaromir's mind even if he does not want to fall in love with the prince. Looking forward to the next chapter. I am eager to hear what Syran will tell his parents.
person Roseykins
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
New reader here. This is a very cute kitty story. I hope Jaromir will be able to save Syran and the crown jewel from the evil uncle.
person kylee
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday! Give your self a treat. This was such a sweet chapter. These two are so funny together. I am glad to see that Syran is good at playing tricks on Jaromir too. Very nice love scenes. Too bad Syran got kidnapped afterwards. He is lucky that Jaromir is following him. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person kylee123
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Syran just got grilled by his mom! She wants all the juicy details? So funny. I imagine that she will be figuring the identity of Syran's secret lover if they are not careful. Syran has to be extra careful or he will end up kidnapped. I wonder if Jaromir would feel the urge to rescue his little snow prince? I am really enjoying your roleplay. I cant wait to read more.
person kylee123
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Awesome chapter. Thoroughly wonderful. Jaromir is quite the unusual thief. He is so comfortable even leaving his coat on Syran's bed. Almost as if he was teasing Syran. I loved the hot hot sex scene. I Love this role play. You are doing a great job. I think roleplays are great because the writers really end up sparking each other's creativity. Please keep at it. I am looking forward to the next chapter.