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I just finished re-reading all the stories leading up to and including Falling Down and hoping I would find an update. I'm very sorry to see that there is going to be a hiatus for this story and hope that if you find you will not be able to continue it that you at least let us know what you had planned on having happen in the story.

Look, I really, really like your stories, but.. I feel you could use some work on transitions. I often have to read an area twice to try to figure out: is this a time transition or a place transition and how much time has passed. This time I also had to try and figure out why everyone was in the hospital, and it was never directly stated. I think this chapter was really one of the worst you did and worry that your spending all your efforts on the new story. But please remember, I love reading your stuff, I'm enjoying the heck out of this story and I'm really not trying to run you down or anything, I'm just trying to point out an area that I think could use improvement - your transitions of time

Wow, I spend all day watching my kid wrestle and I miss THREE chapters!!!! And GREAT chapters too! I especially loved the one where Ryuu, Haru and Tatsuya (sorry, I didn't write his name down, so I screwed up the spelling yet again!) drag Kenta shopping!

The last chapter tho, had me worried. Ruka needs to just let Suke be. Daisuike is used to getting hurt, very hurt, and he knows what to do and what he needs. Ruka just needs to be there to support him, not to go against him.

Anyway, great chapters and I hope this doesn't turn into a big fight for Ruka and Suke.

OMG, you've been busy! Updating twice! Yay! I just finished ch. 18 and I gotta say: You go Ruka! OMG, to stand up to Daisuike's father like that! Amazing! And it was all a test! What a bastard! To put them through all that. And poor Haru; no one except their father knew about Haru's relationship and his loss? What a shame. I could have never kept something like that to myself.

Ok, on to the next chapter! Oh, and btw: Tatshya (I forgot how you spell his name,sorry), he's adorable! I want one just like him!!!

Ok, what's going on? Ruka realizes he's broke and has to sell a car?


Hey, I LOVED the line you big ball of flamboyant goo! (or something like that!) Hysterical!!!! And OMG, Ryuu and Tatysua (I will ALWAYS misspell his name, sorry) are THE SAME FUCKING PERSON!!!!!!!! But....Kenta is finally feeling something for Ryuu; he better hurry up before Tatysua snatches him away! Or will anything happen between Tatysua and Haru?

Anyway, awesome chapter; can't wait for the next one!


Happy New Year!!!

I don't trust the dad, its too good to be true.

I wish that I thought Daisuke had the where withal to tell his father to fuck off, but I know that it is both not in his nature to say that to his father/boss and that he is too young to understand how he needs to do it. I want every one of his brothers to magically appear next to him and tell him that he doesn't have to obey his father - but even if they did, would Daisuke go along with them? He feels obligated to obey his father even though it's just an old man's prejudice speaking. I hope you don't take too long to write some more.

OMG, what is Suke gonna do??????? They'll both be heartbroken if he breaks up w/Ruka! I say, screw his father and follow your heart!

I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter; hopefully I won't have to wait as long......(hint, hint)! hahah Happy New Yr.!

AAAAHHHH!!!!! EVIL EVIL EVIL!

God I can't wait to the next chapter :)

I just finished the Proposal chapter and now I'm crying! That was so sweet what Ruka said; he's such a romantic, making sure the room was ready beforehand. Suke better say yes!!!!


And yes, I'm a little disappointed we won't be reading about Haru and Tatysa (sorry, I screwed up the name again!) Maybe as a side story?