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by MadMaxxCoyote

person Anonymous
schedule July 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm freaking happy! Thanks for the update! I loved it, sweet Connor deserves all the joy 'n happiness w Micah. 

person Tahn
schedule July 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad this story came back. I missed it and thought about it from time to time, wondering where it had gone. Thank you for the new chapter. Can't wait for more.
person Avernion
schedule July 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I just found this story, and I love it! The tension between Connor and Micha is so tantalising, and I adore the younger brother. Normally, I dislike meek characters like Ross, but here, it really works. I didn’t really read the descriptions of this story in so much detail before jumping in, but when I realise you were the author of Alpha and Omega (a story I still think about even after four years of no updates) I knew I had to check this one out too. And I’m so glad I did.  I really feel for Connor, and I long for him to get a happy ever after, or at least something like that. He is so beautifully written. Yesterday when I came home from a ten hour long shift, I was just supposed to throw an eye on the story to see if it was something I should read later when I actually could keep my eyes open, but I just couldn’t put the story down. It was just that good. Also, I didn’t actually realise that this was a vampire fic before fangs literally came out. Haha, I was so not prepared for that.  Naturally, I loved it. It suddenly made so much sense for Connor to feel this predatory vibe from the man. I also love that Micha is such a sweet character, in spite of his power and wealth. For a vampire, he’s practically a darling. I also enjoy the fact that he is so very, very old. Makes him more interesting, I think.

Anyway, I’m really looking forward to the next chapter.

person Anonymous
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Omgggggggggggg you updated!!! And this chapter was soooo good (although I missed Ross) I read the whole thing again and you're such an amazing writer I love how you've done their accents so well and Connor is just the Most Relatable character. Thanks so much for another great chapter update soon!
person Anonymous
schedule June 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I noticed this story was started in 2009... so I am hoping you work on it like you said you would on your profile. I really adore the characters and it would suck to not be able to read about them in a new chapter every once in a while.
person Tahn
schedule January 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going, I'm loving this story.
person ILOVEYOU
schedule July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is sosososososososooooo good! please you must continue this! not only are your characters realistic but they are also portrayed beautifully! please write more! as u said on ur bio, dont yiu hate it when people dont finish their fics? and as for attention, i promise i will faithfully review each and every thing you write! ive also read your other works and may i say, they r absolutely FANTASTIC. i especially loved Nature Nurtures! ‹3
schedule May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really interested to see what will happen next!
person addiena saffir
schedule May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More please. I really like the way you're building up things slow and fast at the same time without it seeming disjointed. This story is a very good read so far, so do please finish it.
person Cloebe
schedule November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've probably read these 3 chapters like 10 times, always end up coming back to check and see if we get a bit more of Micah and Connor. It's great that you have me loving these guys after only three chappies! Especially since I've been quite turned off by the whole vampire deal recently, hahaha, not with this, tho. I sure hope to see more!