rate_review Reviews

Wow, you are very brave to come forth. Many people wouldn't understand. There have been a few tv shows that have dealt with girls who "feel" like boys, but they look and act like girls. One medical show had a girl, a beautiful girl, w/a boyfriend, who was in the hospital for something totally unrelated, but when the doctors examined her, (why her ob/gyn; she was probably 16, never saw this, I don't know!!!), they found out she had both sex organs, but more the male sex organ than the female. So she decided to have the surgery to transgender into a male; she always felt different growing up, and realized this is the reason why.

Anyway, you should be proud of yourself and there is nothing to be ashamed of, embrace who you really are! But, how does your husband feel? How is he dealing w/this? Not to pry or anything; just curious.

Hope you're feeling better!

This was a really good chapter b/c it really dealt w/Abby's jealousy. She really thought she'd be ok w/Ben having a relationship w/another guy, but then jealousy always seems to rear its ugly head! I give her a lot of credit tho; I don't think I could handle it. I get jealous if my b/f DANCES with another chick! Hahahah So, yeah, I don't think I could handle it, but good for Abby. I think it'll take a lot of adjusting and compromising on all of their parts.


I wanted to wish you and your family a Happy Hanukkah, Merry Xmas, and Happy Kwanza, whichever ones you celebrate!

Ok, I'm confused: why did Ben think that Abby was playing him? Even after I read his explanation to Derrick, I still didn't get it.

And I can totally see Abby not being ready to share the bed w/Derrick! She really needs to get used to the idea, to have him live there so she can see him day in and day out.

This chapter was cute; shopping and making room in Derrick's apt. for Ben's stuff. Of course if things work out, Ben won't need his stuff there!

I can see where Ben would be thinking of Abby and missing her also. It's hard going from one person for so many yrs., to someone else. Thankfully, Abby is so enthusiastic about all this!

This last chapter was cute; Abby is so friendly and supportive! She's really a great wife who will do anything to keep her husband happy. But, I do agree w/Derrick and Ben: they should take things slower; get to know each other and the dinner w/the three of them every week is a great idea.

Good chapter; I look forward to the next.

And congrats on your happy marriage. I can't remember if I ever fell in love at first sight; definitely lust, but I'm don't remember about love. It definitely wasn't with my ex! lol

Good chapter; one grammar error, when Abbey was telling Derrick she didn't want to loose Ben, it should have been lose Ben. Also, you change between pov's too quickly and first person, third person, etc. You'll write he and then write I and it's confusing. And when you change pov's you should have a few spaces inbetween the paragraphs so the reader knows another character is talking. Also, on a side note: after a night w/ each other, how can Ben and Derrick possibly love each other; that was pretty hard to believe. Lust, yes, love, no.

Anyway, it's a really good story and I look forward to when Abbey and Derrick meet!

Sorry, I spelled Abby's name wrong in my last review! My intention for my last review wasn't to be mean; I just wanted to point out a few details about the story and how it would read easier for the reader. Also, I was thinking about Ben's mental state. I think he is confusing lust w/love. He hasn't been w/a guy for a long time and it's understandable that he would think he's falling head over heels w/the first guy he sleeps with. And maybe the same can be said for Derrick. They should definitely slow things down a bit. Anyway, the story is good and I'm enjoying it. (However way Ben and Derrick go, I'll still like the story!)

Just wanted to tell you how interesting your story is! I read tons of slash stories, and have always wondered about what kind of effect a three-way realationship (M/M/F) would work. Of course,there is all the sexual situations to think about! But what about the emotional effects of such on the people involved.

I'm lookig forward to reading more! Thank you for sharing. :)

What a great story! I love the fact that Abby is such a fangirl! Can't wait to read the next chapter!