rate_review Reviews

When I read the summary of your story, I was intrigued because I had read a story that had a threesome named The Third by LadyPrudence. A most excellent story with one defect. It was not finished. Hopefully, yours will be. So far, you have made a fantastic start to your story. Very nicely written, with some fresh ideas. Looking forward to the next chapter.

OMG my poor Derrick !!!!!!! they are all assh*les !!!!! can I tell you how much I love Abby !!!!!!!!!! She's my hero !!!!! he should have told everyone at home what was going on at work, man he had everyone all worried for the wrong resume at the beginning !!!!! LOVED the update and I hope to see you ion again !!!!!!!!!!!

New eager here !!! I loved this story of yours !!!!!! you have written some heavy stuff here but all ok with me ...Man I hope your haven't forgotten about it and hope to see an update soon on this....I'm so hooked !!!!!!!

Why are all the great stories incomplete? Nooooo! :'( if you ever continue it, please email me!

Yay! You're back! Hope everything is going well....

I can imagine Derrick's AND his mom's embarrassment over his story on Abby, Ben and the baby! lol Strange conversation for your mom!

I have been following this story on and off and I think this is the first time I have reviewed. Its nice to read a three some couple that get along and the love is not restricted by sex. Well done. :)

This was a GREAT chapter! Jake was too funny; noticing how Derrick was checking out the cute waiter! hahaha

The part with Derrick's mom was touching; I'm glad they found a way to connect again.

Ok, boy am I confused!!!! But let me comment on the story first: GREAT, GREAT, GREAT chapter!!! I was laughing, crying, choking on my Chinese! You name it! Excellent chapter!

I am SO, SO, SO VERY GLAD that Irene finally came to see the light! Thank God her and Abby worked things out! I'm also glad that Derrick went to see his mom; and none to soon it seems. Hopefully that prick Tim won't track them down - I hope he's out of his mom's life for good.

Ok, now on my confusion: ok, the people I stated in your earlier post I guess were all girls who already w/girls. Ok, so I guess all this time I was thinking YOU were a girl. Then you said you were gay and never liked girls. So then I was thinking you were a guy. But then, you mentioned a husband, (congrats on your grandchild and I'm sorry for your loss). So, you're female and want to transition to a male? Like I originally thought. Or are you a male wanting to transition to a female and you would lose your husband b/c he would want to be w/a guy and not a girl?

I know I had a long comment, or review, whatever you want to call it, on your other post. I guess I was assuming you were a girl wanting to transition to a boy. Idk, I'm still confused! Sorry!

What is EDNA? I really enjoyed the chapter. I'm glad Derrick is feeling love for Abby, which Ben was right, can make one feel more intimate. The three-way was good; but I agree w/Derrick, shouldn't be done all the time, b/c then they are all missing out on some one-on-one time.

Oh, btw: brunch is a combo of breakfast and lunch, not dinner. There's linner (lunch and dinner! hahah)

I can't wait to see what the evil mom has to say! Or has she thought things over and would rather suck it up and have a relationship with her daughter? I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!

I hope your finger's better; you are one dedicated writer, writing w/a bad finger! lol

I am really surprised that Abby's mother has not contacted her, and it's been 2 months!!!!! I was sure she would be storming down her door that day! She really should go over there and clear the air. She definitely doesn't want to let this fester.


Can three people really get married? I haven't heard that one yet. It would be a good idea, that way Derrick will know that Ben and Abby are totally committed to him. But....then again, on the other hand, they haven't known Derrick for that long; other people wait longer before the big step.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see how Ben and Derrick react to the wedding news!