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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved the update! is her friend going to get an elf as well? that'd be fun... and give her some female human company ;) and i was almost hoping that her brother would find someone as well. how cute if they all three went :P but whatever happens, i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I especially loved the interaction between Rillian and Jody. It was so funny how she was able to poke a few small holes in his scornful, sexist attitude and rudeness. Hmm, wondering if Rillian is going to get a little mortal action? LOL
Ooh, I'm on the edge of my seat, worrying about Mary's deteriorating condition. Please don't leave us hanging long!
Ooh, I'm on the edge of my seat, worrying about Mary's deteriorating condition. Please don't leave us hanging long!
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Val is like a typical ignorate male. LOL! Its sweet how the once mucho male is so in love with Mary.
The transformation isn't going to well by the looks of it. :D
The transformation isn't going to well by the looks of it. :D
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always.
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't blame Mary for being mad at the bossy elf. I hope that she's going to be OK! *looks nervously for the next chapter*
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK, I have only read on chapter and have done so because the title amused me. It amused me because I am welsh. I started and was sucked in. I look forward to reading the rest and reviewing each chapter as I go. x
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Communication difficulties between men and women are bad enough with out one being elf and not speaking English. You need a Beta though. You've made a few minor mistakes like Sent instead of Scent. Tern instead of Turn. I am thoroughly enjoying this though!
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uhoh! Are these changes that Mary is going through going to make her more elf like? It might come in handy, especially when Val turns chauvinistic. The motorcycle should be fun!
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lover's tiff, love it. LOL!
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant, as always.