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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... I keep checking for updates. I really do hope Mary is actually pregnant - that whole morning sickness thing seems prophetic to me LOL here's hoping! Anyhow, I also love that Rill & Jodi seem to have a lil' sexual tension thing going on... I'm growing so restless here wanting to know what's gonna happen next - please please please update soon.
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November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a fun chapter! You do such an amazing job in writing descriptive scenes that I can visualize it all, almost like watching a movie. (Speaking of movies, the car chase in the little Ford Fiesta reminded me of the wonderful chase scene with Matt Damon in the Mini Cooper in The Bourne Identity.)
I laughed out loud reading the final scene with the elves hiding under the sheep. Even Rillian would find it hard to maintain his arrogance and dignity with confused and indignant sheep trampling over him!
I laughed out loud reading the final scene with the elves hiding under the sheep. Even Rillian would find it hard to maintain his arrogance and dignity with confused and indignant sheep trampling over him!
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November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always.
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November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mary is becoming more elf :) Yes more will be good
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November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the action. It is fun to see the elves as stealth warriors. And I am finally warming up a bit to Louis. :)
Even with all the equipment taken out, I am not seeing how they are going to get Mary onto a space ship at the bottom of the icy cold lake, before she takes a turn for the (even) worse. Do the elves have a Star Trek-style transporter device?? Can't wait to read more!
Even with all the equipment taken out, I am not seeing how they are going to get Mary onto a space ship at the bottom of the icy cold lake, before she takes a turn for the (even) worse. Do the elves have a Star Trek-style transporter device?? Can't wait to read more!
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November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your no fun not giving away the plot yet. :P LOL! Love this story can't wait to see what you have in store next. :D
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November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Are Louis and Vals sister going to get something going? What about Jody and Rillian? Maybe Mary is blind because her eyes are changing! Update soon.
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November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, you have done such a great job. So at this point I have fallen completely for Rillian. I know there is not a whole lot written about him but he is a great character. If your up to a new story I would love to know more about Rillian.
~mcgreor1
~mcgreor1
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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As weird as it is to say it i'm a bit glad for the spat with Val. I'm all for the perfect couple thing but everyone else has little lovers quarells now and then, they should to, lol. I was expecting Mary to turn all superhuman with the nanites, not for her to go all dead and dying on me! Yay for plot twist. Now i'm all anxious what's going to happen to her (fingers crossed she'll be okay).
Rillian and Jody make an interesting team. Any chances on them becoming a new couple? I see potential prospects with Louis and Nearwen too. (ponder ponder)
This is easily now my favorite story. Looking forward to more updates! (And seeing how Val handles a motorcycle)
Rillian and Jody make an interesting team. Any chances on them becoming a new couple? I see potential prospects with Louis and Nearwen too. (ponder ponder)
This is easily now my favorite story. Looking forward to more updates! (And seeing how Val handles a motorcycle)
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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My, my! Things are getting tense! Will they be able to get to the ship undetected? Will they be able to help Mary? Where will they go once they make it to the ship? Can't wait for more.