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February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a fun chapter! I love reading a story where the women kick ass, and the heroine saves her man (I hope!). LOL, Val as a damsel in distress.
I can't wait to read how you/Mary manage to extricate a 7-foot tall comatose alien from a (mostly) secure, locked down government facility.
I can't wait to read how you/Mary manage to extricate a 7-foot tall comatose alien from a (mostly) secure, locked down government facility.
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February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So cool a update. Lets hope the rescue comes off without too much hitch. As for the bitchy Dr she needs to have a taste of her own medicine.
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant, as always.
I'd still love to see a happy ending with Val and Mary together(with a wedding and babies).
Also, I would like to see Jody melt Rillians heart, and, while this is just an "out there" pairing with no evidence or reasoning behind it, how about Naerwen/Louis?
Regardless, this fic is absolutely brilliant. A happy ending would just make it perfect (in my opinion, anyway).
Your loyal fan,
Dave.
I'd still love to see a happy ending with Val and Mary together(with a wedding and babies).
Also, I would like to see Jody melt Rillians heart, and, while this is just an "out there" pairing with no evidence or reasoning behind it, how about Naerwen/Louis?
Regardless, this fic is absolutely brilliant. A happy ending would just make it perfect (in my opinion, anyway).
Your loyal fan,
Dave.
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love that Val was able to more than hold his own against the evil psychic woman, even in his weakened condition. And Mary the roof climbing badass is awesome.
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mary and co trying to bust out Val, love it. :D Yeah I have a feeling Louis will help out.
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter. the action is getting exciting. *fans face*
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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. The plot keeps me interested there are so many twists and turns we never know what is going to happen next.
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely fantastic. I am desperately hanging by a thread to find out how Mary and the others are going to rescue Val. I am also excited to see whats going to happen between Jodie and Rillian. Please update soon.
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates and good riddance writers block!
Fabulous to see Val is still alive though boo on the dumb doctors for torturing him with medical equipment. Boo! Crazy people with thier shoot first, ask questions later mentality..
Plot development between Jody and Rillian is another yay! (Jody must have no censor, talking about stuff like that around the guys, for shame, haha..)
Looking forward to more great updates ~
Fabulous to see Val is still alive though boo on the dumb doctors for torturing him with medical equipment. Boo! Crazy people with thier shoot first, ask questions later mentality..
Plot development between Jody and Rillian is another yay! (Jody must have no censor, talking about stuff like that around the guys, for shame, haha..)
Looking forward to more great updates ~
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love long chapters! This one is filled with interesting stuff. I am intrigued by the contact between Louis and Val -- I like Louis much better now that he is not perving on Mary. And he seems to be the only human showing Val compassion.
I am really loving the byplay between Jody & Rillian, particularly her 'innocently' provocative behavior causing him to gulp down anti-Viagra. Absolute best line (and follow up reaction):
"I find that sex is the best way of dealing with anxiety. Of course, I will just have to get myself off, but it’s a close second.”
LOL
I hope that the fact that you are starting another story doesn't mean that you are losing interest in this one! Please, please, please finish this wonderful story! *looks at author with pleading puppy dog eyes*
I am really loving the byplay between Jody & Rillian, particularly her 'innocently' provocative behavior causing him to gulp down anti-Viagra. Absolute best line (and follow up reaction):
"I find that sex is the best way of dealing with anxiety. Of course, I will just have to get myself off, but it’s a close second.”
LOL
I hope that the fact that you are starting another story doesn't mean that you are losing interest in this one! Please, please, please finish this wonderful story! *looks at author with pleading puppy dog eyes*