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Hurray! Another excellent chapter. In suspense. . .

Oh my, what a roller coaster of highs and lows in this chapter! Impending fatherhood is sure doing a number on Val's equilibrium. As always, clever Darrah is fun to read.

Having Jody & Rillian thrown together and fighting for survival promises interesting developments for your next update. And have Val's dominant and high handed actions gone too far beyond turn-on for Mary? I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to see where you are going next . . .

I am sure Jody and Rillian will be fine.

woooo more chapters i love your story i think it I love your writing style and the plot of the story it just fantastic

I really enjoy this story, and I hope for a happy ending when you finish it ;)

Sorry I havent reviewed for awhile no pc. Im enjoying Rillian and Jody angle

Fun chapter. I love how you are slowly developing the relationship between Rillian and Jody, rather than having them jump right into smut. (Not that I wouldn't enjoy that as well, LOL.)

As with the last chapter, I continue to be curious about how Val is going to react to what happened between his little sister and Louis. Will he be livid, especially considering that he first encountered Louis trying to steal a kiss from Val's own woman? Or will he be blase about it, as apparently elves are about sex? Hmmm . . .

Poor Mary, shut down before she could get some elf lovin', then Val actually uses his glamour on her. Bet she won't like that when she realizes it.

I enjoyed Jody's excitement as she and Rillian did their exploring, but my absolute favorite part was when Mary was practically drooling over the shirtless Perran. LOL, hope Val wasn't reading her mind . . .

It is rather unfortunate that life has to get in the way of our fun but alas that is to expected. I have been reading this story from the very first chapter and I can honestly tell you i have not gotten bored, but wait patiently for the next chapter and I will continue to read as long as you continue to write. I have noticed that you have misspelt a couple of words but I am quite unable to offer my services as a beta at this point in time sorry. Anyhow I would just like to let you know how much I have enjoyed your story.

awesome interaction between those two. I'm wondering what the others will have to say about that.

Hey, what a fantastic surprise, after being offline for a few days, to come back to a brand new chapter from you!!

Mary pregnant?! Mary & Val engaged to be married!!! But then, just when I think a happy ending is edging closer . . . dun dun dun . . . an evil insectoid race? The interceptor's back on their tail? Yikes, you've got me hanging on the edge of my seat.

I love how Nearwen was so determined to brush Louis off, then folded like a pack of cards when he kissed her. Heh.

And don't think that I didn't notice that we didn't get any Jody/Rillian action this time around. Rillian is so tightly wound that I can't wait to see the fireworks (literally??) when he finally lets loose.

I know that I say this every time, but I really do so enjoy the way you write Mary & Val together, so yummy and sweet.

Thanks for the lovely update!