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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Have you been watching the movie Casper a lot recently?
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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Re: chapter 8
Another great chapter! Nice handling of their conflict and its resolution. The lemon was sweet and lovely!
Nice line at the end: “Can I keep you?” he asked.
Answer: yesyesYES! I hope that 13 days is enough time for her to realize that she loves him and wants to stay.
I look forward to reading about the elven "gathering" . . .
Another great chapter! Nice handling of their conflict and its resolution. The lemon was sweet and lovely!
Nice line at the end: “Can I keep you?” he asked.
Answer: yesyesYES! I hope that 13 days is enough time for her to realize that she loves him and wants to stay.
I look forward to reading about the elven "gathering" . . .
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December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh im so happy you came back. What a lovely chapter. The ice cube scene was awesome. Loving it. Thanks you so much!
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, the plot thickens. Although I was hoping for the lemon in chapter 7, I enjoyed what you wrote. I like how she is becoming more accepting of the intimacy between them. And it is interesting to see a little more of the alien world, although he seems awfully casual about slavery . . .
How will Mary react to being called his pleasure slave? Is Valdagerion going to get in trouble at the gathering? Is their first time together going to be in front of an audience?? I can't wait for the lemony goodness!
How will Mary react to being called his pleasure slave? Is Valdagerion going to get in trouble at the gathering? Is their first time together going to be in front of an audience?? I can't wait for the lemony goodness!
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your such a tease. Just when it was getting hot between those two. LOL! But I do love the tension between the two. Update when you can. :)
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, there is going to be hell to pay for that. I don't think that Mary is going to like being a slave much. Update soon.
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. :D
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Such a lovely couple. Iloved the story from the beginning. The way he protects her. His human, sounds endearing. Thanks for writing.
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another lovely chapter! The bath scene is very hot and yummy.
Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter -- I am so looking forward to reading the continuation of their encounter.
Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter -- I am so looking forward to reading the continuation of their encounter.
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November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In all honesty I started reading this story after going WHAT IN THE F*** looking at your title. Then I started to read... and I fell in love. I can't wait to see how this goes... He's a man in love fighting against all odds... Even the woman he's in love with!