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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Hope it has a happy ending for Mary/Val.
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, hope you continue it soon!
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. Nice to see a bit more of his family, there seems to be some plot coming there.
I like the little breakthrough in their relationship. Needless to say, I am hoping for a happy ending between those two! :-)
I like the little breakthrough in their relationship. Needless to say, I am hoping for a happy ending between those two! :-)
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So what happened in the meeting?
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yum, chapter 9 is wonderful! Their "performance" at the gathering was very hot and sexy. And I like that you included more information about his place in his culture (and he has a sister?!), more of that would be nice. It would also be fun to hear some reactions from the elves who witnessed them together.
It was nice that she seemed to lose more of her hesitation and inhibitions about him, even though it took some aphrodisiac wine. They're so good for each other!
I look forward to the next chapter!
It was nice that she seemed to lose more of her hesitation and inhibitions about him, even though it took some aphrodisiac wine. They're so good for each other!
I look forward to the next chapter!
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice indeed. Update when you get the chance. :D
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*dies and flails around* My god! This is incredible! Never thought you'd ever turn me onto blond men...er...elves, but by the gods, girl, this is amazing! You, little miss, have got the...just...guh. You're incredible. This is really coming along nicely. Hot, emotional, passionate...mmm. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So whats up with biting this "mating spot"? Is it just something sexual, or does it infer commitment? If so, how much of a commitment? Very interesting. Update soon.
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December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing lemon.
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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was quiet hot and yet sweet. Nicely done. :D