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WOOHOO, a new chapter is here!!! I was worried that you had abandoned my favorite AFF.net story.

Aww, Val is so sweet, if a bit overbearing at times.

I'm with Roya and lovelyl in suspecting that maybe Mary is pregnant.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you for sticking with this story.

I know I reviewed before but I reckon or my guess is not only is Mary knocked up but she is part elf herself, that is why she can to the telepathy etc. that not other humans can do with the elfish. How close am I? Hmm? LOL!

Hello,

I'm a new reader! :D I mean I'm not into Het and always reading M/M but your fic somehow got my attention and when I start reading, I couldn't stop!!! O.o so I read all of it back to back! I didn't sleep last night at all! O.O I mean wow I couldn't! I just wanted to read and read and see what happens next! :) This is a great fic, both loving and adorable and adventurous at the same time! ;) but my God, who can wait for the next chapter??? :( so please please update soon ^_^

Your new fan! :P

Oh ye, I forgot! :P

The attack was from Val's mother, wasn't it???! that bitch!!! (ops) she wasn't even concern about his son's safety, put his life in danger to get read of the human slave!!! >.< Well I don't know how can this going to end well ... but there are two things in my mind! first that Mary seems to have some mixed blood! maybe with Elves!!! who knows! something very important ... (my guess)
and the second: Is she already pregnant with Val's child, the next prince? :D that's going to be a perfect blast!!! lol I can't wait to see their faces when they figure this one out! :p ohhhh please update sooooooooonnnnn. tnxxx

Ooh, who's behind the mysterious intruders? Luckily, Mary knows just how to take care of her elf. ;-)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Well that is one way to make Val feel better. ;) LOL!

A bittersweet chapter -- I like how you wrote his dawning realization of the depth of his feelings for her, and her recognition of the change between them. But I am sad to see the foreshadowing of an unhappy ending.

I'll still keep my fingers crossed for a resolution that keeps them together . . .

I really like Val and Mary together. They are just so sweet. I hope they get to stay together. Please a happy ending to this when it comes up, not too soon I hope. :D

I'm so happy that you are continuing your story!

This may be the best chapter yet. It is a nice mix of exploration of the alien world and animals, development of their intimacy, and hints of his family drama. You are doing such a great job in moving the story forward.

I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a happy ending!!

Cute chapter. One question, can the human's and elfs have offspring?