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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Val needs to know what? That she has elf blood? That she is pregnant? Update soon!
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aargh, another cruel cliffhanger!
Nice to see a bit of what Mary is thinking and going through. But it seems very out of character that Val gave up so easily trying to reach Mary and became so passive in the face of his mother's manipulations. It would be nice to read more about what is going on in his head.
Keep up the good work!
Nice to see a bit of what Mary is thinking and going through. But it seems very out of character that Val gave up so easily trying to reach Mary and became so passive in the face of his mother's manipulations. It would be nice to read more about what is going on in his head.
Keep up the good work!
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I was right Mary is part elf. :D Update soon, please..... :D
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May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see ur back. :D
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May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new chapter! I was worried that you had abandoned your wonderful story.
I am on the edge of my seat, waiting to see how these two come back together -- I'm so sad that they are suffering from their separation.
More, please!
I am on the edge of my seat, waiting to see how these two come back together -- I'm so sad that they are suffering from their separation.
More, please!
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such a tease. :P So the Queen is either a allie or a enemy... Hmm! Okay now you have to hurry up and update, you can't just leave me hanging like this. :)
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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo glad that you updated soo soon, but i hope you update again really soon, cause i'm really addicted to this story! I think i read the story over 3 times right now, just to pass time and to reread the plot unfolding in the story. Update soon. I can't wait to read more >.
Ja-Ne =^_^=
Ja-Ne =^_^=
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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!! You can't leave your faithful readers hanging from this awful new development. Please update very very very soon.
One tiny bright spot: at least she now realizes that she loves him and needs to be with him. Mary's realization, weighing the comforts of home versus being without Val, was nicely written.
One tiny bright spot: at least she now realizes that she loves him and needs to be with him. Mary's realization, weighing the comforts of home versus being without Val, was nicely written.
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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brill, as always. Judging from her symptoms, I'd say she's pregnant.
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mary is pregnant? It explains why she is healing so well part elfish baby inside of her is making those wounds heal. Its funny I was just re reading this last night before bed and was pleased to see a update today. So good to see more to come. :D