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for Dont abduct me I'm Welsh!

by leftat11

schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, trouble! Looking forward to it. Haha, yeah the title is a bit unhelpful in that aspect but it is pretty original which earns it double bonus points in my book.
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel terrible about it but i've skipped over this story several times but I finally convinced myself to take a look and now i'm hooked! Very well written and i'm loving the non-traditional elf thing. Definitaly adding this to my must-keep-reading list. I'm curious how much Louis really knows about his job since he was so confused by Mary's elf books. (I so totally busted out laughing at his Legolas thought when he was invading her mind) Hoping for updates soon!
person Amanda88
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow great chapter! Please update again soon!
person circe266
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Panting* That was hot! And tender and lovely as well, in your depiction of Val's desperate need for their union. This was everything I hoped for in their first moments back together.

It sounds like you have more planned for them in the next chapter, which is good, as it seems like Mary didn't quite get the, erm, satisfaction that the out-of-control elf did. Val better recover quickly and please his woman! :D
person lovelyl
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am sure Val has only just began with Mary... LOL!
person lovelyl
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I finally came back online after 3wks to see my fav story has been updated. About time those two found each other. :D
person dschinny
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5: not what I'd expect an elf to be or to do, but surprises make a good read
person MnMs
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Now what? Where will they go? How will they get away from everyone that is after them? Can't wait for more!
person circe266
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
They're back together! *does a happy dance*

How perfect that she is dressed to kill and looking hot on the dancefloor when he sees her again. (Yeah, I know, I'm such a girl.) It was fantastic how you were able to create and sustain the tension and anticipation throughout this chapter, culminating in that hot, but brief, moment of sweet reunion.

Thank you for updating so quickly this time! I hope that you are preparing a great big serving of lemony goodness for us. ;-) I'm on the edge of my seat until then . . .
person MnMs
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When is Val going to show up to rescue her? Poor Louis if he gets caught in a lip lock when Val shows up! Update soon.