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I have been hoping for a update with this... How the tables have turned Mary not understanding their world now the elves having problems with hers.

Brilliant, as always. I hope they have a happy ending (and babyz)

You're welcome! You make my day whenever I see a new chapter posted.

As always, I am a sucker for the romance and lemons between Val and Mary, but I also love the humor of the aliens trying to make sense of the human world. It is a nice contrast between Val's near-obsessive seduction of Mary, Darrah's boyish enthusiasm for human culture and technology, and Rillian's wary watchfulness. It is very funny to picture three 7-foot elves + Mary crammed into a little economy car.

I look forward to the coming action, though I hope it is more 'romance' than 'angst'.

I want to see Val drive the car! Can't wait to see their opinions on traffic! Update soon.

Aw, you're welcome! A few typos in this chap but good work as usual. Looking forward to what else you've got planned.

P.S. Having Val drive her econo-box would be epic! That poor car.. lol.

Your most welcome. I really do enjoy this story. :D Can't wait to see what is next especially when they get back to Val's world... His mother is not going to like this... LOL!

My goodness! Val broke the door to get to her! So who is sneaking around the apartment? I hope that Val doesn't break them. Unless its those government agents, then he can break all he wants. Update soon.

Yay, another great, lemony chapter. I enjoyed the mood of intensity you created and sustained for their lovemaking. And speaking of love, they seem to be dancing around exchanging 'I love you' -- close, touching on their special emotion and even suggesting a real commitment, but not quite there yet. I look forward to reading how you get them to that level, and how they react to each other (assuming they get there! *fingers crossed*).

I hope that the sounds she heard is just her roommate. Their happy reunion can't be interrupted already, after just a few hours/one night of passion!

Well done, I didn't expect a update so soon. :D I like the way Mary and Val are so hot for each other.

Ooo very great chapter, love the shower scene and that they are together again. Please update again soon!