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Good story, I'm enjoying it very much. But I have to ask, is English not your first language? I ask because there are many grammatical mistakes, mid-used words (stake and steak, wiles and whiles, more...), and plenty of mid-spelled words. It's not "handsom", it's "handsome". These are problems that someone who spoke English first probably wouldn't make. I am not trying to be critical, but a good author should acknowledge issues in their writing. You could greatly benefit from having a Beta look over your work before you post it. It would certainly make reading your work easier. Please accept this review in the spirit of helpfulness, as it was intended. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Love it!!!!! Please update!

Congratulations, that's fabulous to hear, so excited for you that you're getting published. I knew you were good enough to be! I can't wait to pick up a copy of this.

My email is eternal_lostlove@yahoo.com

Congrats on the book.
I have been fallowing your storie for sometime and was worried that you had stopped writing. I can't wait to see what happens.

Be well,
Kat

Congratulations on your book deal!!! I am happy that your storytelling skills have been recognized, and that you haven't abandoned your wonderful tale.

I look forward to getting my hands on the rest of the story, hopefully someday soon. I will send my email info to the email listed on your profile (alexpudge@gmail.com).

Cheers!

I love the story and find that it has the exact right amounts of human romance and the sci-fi fantasy. I've followed the story from the start and even if there was a long gap in between waiting I found that I always remembered exactly where I was in the story. Thank you for creating such memorable characters and congratulations on your book deal.

Congratulations on your book deal. Been following Mary and Val from the beginning, one of my favs. Please keep us all updated on what is happening next it's a book i would love in my collection.

Congrats on the book deal. I actually thought your other series would get picked up first. I was hoping you would finish this on the site. Oh well!

email is lovelyl1976@yahoo.com.au

Please please please tell me this story hasn't been abandoned -- I love the characters so much, and I am DYING to know how it all turns out.

Please continue!

Sincerely,
Your biggest fan

Fantastic stuff, as always.