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review for The Conception chap 1

(I managed to steal internet for awhile! so you shall be spammed with 2 reviews!)

I thought i would never get used to Devin being the 'top' (thou this style of top is really something quite different seeing as Jayden's always riding Dev)
But this time round... it seems more... acceptable to my tastes... for some reason... XD


-nekoii

the conception chap 2

heh. again. you and your detail.
this has got to be the first time I've read about food, baths, and kisses in such a way.
Made me a little bit hungry I might say XD

But hmmmmmmmmm...
As I am a reader who only read this 'The Conception' after catching up till chap 47 of 'Aurora's Consort'...
It makes me feel rather, a bit sad...
To think they shared such a moment... then what happened afterwards... with Devin's capture. and then, with Devin and his blackness and insanity and then the divorce...
*sniffs*
I just hope you're one of those author's who like to have a Happy Ever After ending!
But no pressure, *fan's pesterme* you end it the way you had planned... I'll read it anyway XD

Okay~

kudos to this 2-chap emotion-filled smut fest XD


- nekoii

:D now this is really good. continue....... wait, this is a one shot. XD love the way they made love and how natural you wrote the way they interacted. Now that I know where this one shot comes in, i'm now heading to Aurora's consort. :D thanks so much and keep up the good work!

Oh my god! That has to be the most intense sex ever. Your amazing.

*giggle* naughty naughty but yay smut haha!

*huge smile* I definitly got a kick out of it. This was so hot i nearly started glowing myself. Thanks so much. You made my day.

Kinky, hot, sweet.
Wow, Devin's not so shy anymore.
They are so beautiful together.
I feel like an intruder (not going to complaint however).

It's feel good after all the angst and drama of the last couple of chappy.

Thank again to write a marvelous story about wonderful people.

Gwengwel

-plays fanfare- Yay! I am cheering for you, this was really well written...but you made me hungry when you mentioned food. I haven't eaten yet today...I want a leita berry, they sound nice. Think you could magic me a virtual leita berry? Mmmm, yum. I love your writing, and although this was good I can't wait for the real thing. I look forward to the next update of Aurora's consort.

OMG - Thank you! This is just perfect. Devin rimming Jayden - geez - I nearly dropped my laptop. I was so excited.
It was so good to read after all the angst in AC, i cann't wait for there reunion. I am glad there is more to come, i am waiting in front of my laptop all night.
*squirming in front of my screen**hug**wait**squirm**fidget**grin sheepishly*

I have to say, this is an amazing story in and of itself. Just knowing the characters from Aurora's Consort and all that's going on with them makes it even better. And thank you for writing it! When I first suggested it, I thought you were going to tell me what to do with myself. Instead of doing that, you wrote something really amazing. Hot and tender and just great!