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Begging for update!

Hi I am dying to read the next chapter of this awesome story. I hope you update soon.

Love Richard! Hope we get to see the boy from the school trip or alternatively a one-shot with him in it.

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

You know, I was thinking about this story this morning and meant to comment again, but got caught up w/the kids. So now I remembered and I wanted to find out if Richard really exists or is he some sort of defense mechanism for Patrick? Patrick was going into this abandoned bldg. all alone to spend the night. So....he was scared and since he's been in the closet for so long and probably thinks about it all the time, his mind made up an imaginary boy to help him cope throughout the night. That's why when he woke up in the a.m., Richy was gone. But, during the night, Richy said he never goes anywhere b/c he has nowhere to go. So, why would he leave in the morning? That's the reason I was thinking he was just a made up character from Patrick's mind.

Wow, chapter 2 was awesome I really like the way that Richard brings out the sweetheart in Pat. I am glad that he was gone before Pat's friends showed up. There is nothing worse than a jock who is in denial of their homosexuality. I wonder if Richard is the same boy that Pat met in the past. I love this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

OMG, I just got chills. Was Patrick just imagining the other guy? Jesus, what a GREAT story!!!!! Patrick is so funny, with his dialogue and his thoughts. And isn't it a shame that a "badass" like Patrick, a social butterfly who everyone looks up to and apparently follows, can't be true to himself? That's what's so sad.

Anyway, fucking awesome story; I hope you continue!

I absolutely love this story. Please share some more with us. Patrick is just hilarious. His girlfriend truly is an idiot for offering herself up in a bet like that. I am very eager to read more.