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This story is so spooky! What is going on with Tristan? he is attracted to two people at the same time. I wonder if Officer Bailey is just playing with his feelings. I wanted to ask about the initials TR. They are not for Tristan because I thought his last name was Gerard. I also wonder if Tristan could be the murderer? He seems to be asleep when the murders take place. Is he turning into a walking zombie murderer? I have to know! I can't wait for the next update.

Ok, here's my fucking review! J/K! GREAT chapter, but wait! Doesn't Tori's last name start w/an R????????? And yeah, I was wondering last chapter why he wasn't around when they all found out about Britney. And then again in this chapter; he's MIA. But, on the other hand, how could someone w/his size kill these girls? Aren't they like the same in size? He doesn't overpower them, right?

Anyway, great chapter and I'm on pins and needles, I hope you don't take as long to update as you did w/Kicks (another FUCKING AWESOME story, btw!)

Ok, I went back and briefly skimmed the first two chapters and didn't see any last name for Tori. But, I bet it begins w/an R!!!!

Oh, btw: nice scene w/Bailey and Tristan! lol I kinda got the feeling in ch. 2 that Bailey was interested in Tristan. But that scene; wow, not too unprofessional, huh? lol (altho I thought Tristan REALLY liked Tori?)

Oh, also, I'm sending over cases and cases of booze, any kind you like, so I'll expect the next update tomorrow! XD

this is definitely one of the most original stories ive read in a long time. i love it, keep 'em coming! i'd get you some 'motivation', but sadly i am poor. T_T

Camui Kiddo, Drink More and write faster... I insist... you wear those taut little hard working pinkies down to nubs 24/7 until the very end of the story [no silly, not the nubs that harded in a cold breeze or with a twist. Take from it me I tried it... its painful when they get caught between the keys], but use those chubby little typing fingers of yours for I want to know who did it NOW!!! I am most impatient, please don't make me wait too long... and damnit don't make it the very sweet cowboy... or ill be mad!!! GRoooowl! Hurry I hate mysteries! Impatient, G

What a horrible murder. What is Tristan going to do? If Tori knows who the likely murderer is they can't just watch the other girls get killed. I hope Tristan will get Tori to give him more details before someone else gets killed. Nice sexy scenes before all the murder stuff happened.

Man, this is such a good story! I LOVE murder mysteries! OMG, why wasn't Tori called when this happened? Or was he called? How does he know who did it and is he in danger also? OMG, this story is FANTASTIC!!!! You better update soon! I don't know how long I can wait for the next chapter! lol

I love the new story. It is very good. Very likable characters. Very good descriptions. I can't wait to see how Tristan will react to finding out Tori's secret.

wahh i don't want him to go to jail and update as soon as u cna this sounds awsome. question does tori have boobs?

HAHAHAHA!! Great end line, I just spat my drink all over my laptop screen. An excellent start I can't wait to see where you go with it!!