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for I Will Not Disobey

by madrachadevvi

schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! Damn this is just so hot! Sigh.... **drifts off into daydreams about paddles, nipple clamps, and cock rings....** Oops! Got lost in thought there for a sec! Yeah, this is something else and I will absolutely not refrain from the puppy dog eyes cause... daaayyyuuummm. More please! **gives madrachadevvi the super-duper most pitiful puppy dog eyes imaginable on the face of the earth**
person hubby
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another good piece of of the puzzle. Leave me on the edge of my seat again,how dare you. I want some more PLEASE.Can't wait for more oh that remind me wifey gonna get it for not sharing lol.Please hurry on the next part
person Roya7777
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely delicious! :D

Although I always like non/con fics but I have to admit, a willing BDSM partner is fun too! :P

Please update soon! ^_^
person hubby
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dom and sub what can I say. Very exciting leaving me excited maybe a little to excited.But now I want more,come on,I want,please I said please now I demand it MORE
person Erica
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very good story. How could you leave us hanging like that? Update soon please.
person GellyBelly
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was soo freaking hot man...
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy shizzah! I've been wiping to drool off my chin the entire time and I read it twice! Woo hoo! There's just something to be said about a sub and a nice big dildo. Yummy!! Absolutely dying for the next one. **gives madrachadevvi sad puppy eyes** Come on! You know you wanna give me an update soon. *poke* Anywho, I can't wait to see how his Dom repays him for being such a good, good, naughty pet!
person Roya7777
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo hot!

I always thought that here in AFF we don;t have enough BDSM/master/slave stories! :P Well yours has given it a fresh new breath! ^_^

Do update soon! ;)

and I don't know what you did to your layout, but the first one was better than the second one! now the sentences are running out of the page! @.@

Anyway, update soon! :D