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February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update this story! I keep re-reading the chapters and I'm dying to see what happens!
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello madrachadevvi (that's a rather indian-like name hmmmm~)
First time reviewer here, I ought to leave two more reviews after I'm done with this one. (But 3 chaps were out, I had to read them all! XD) Hope ya understand~
Overall, I find this BDSM story rather interesting. It shows how bdsm play ought to be done. Whereby punishments are what they ought to be, befitting the 'crime' that was committed. Unlike many other bdsm stories, whereby the dom misuses his position and dishes out extreme punishments.
But then. It's still early on in the story. So I can't say much either. I'm hoping to see more aspects of bdsm displayed properly, like how you've been doing. This is really educational.
and hey, er, about that... that's not fair... how could he have stopped the dildo from slipping out of him?
should he have asked for permission to push it in more firmly so it wont fall out?
I won't say much now, since, we've yet to see what the punishment for 'mistreating the toy' would be.
And... about that bench... You could view it both ways. If the sub's really into pleasing his/her master (at that point of time). The bench would be a good thing to use, since it places him in a position he wants to be.
But if the sub's not ready (in the state of mind, or smthing) then the bench might only serve to increase the sub's fear/panic. eh? Double edge sword much? *shrugs*
Anyway, this is good. I hope readers who have a messed up opinion on what bdsm is about reads this story and learns a thing or two.
This is probably the best bdsm (properly written, educational) story I've read, since 'Depravity' (by ffpanda) so many years ago.
I wish you well for this, and I sincerely hope this story gets more recognized.
All the best! ^_^ I look forward to more (more variety in the many situations that may occur while scening) from you. *whispers* hope I'm not pressuring you or anything.. uuuh... yeah? *patpat* just, own time own target eh~
- nekoii
First time reviewer here, I ought to leave two more reviews after I'm done with this one. (But 3 chaps were out, I had to read them all! XD) Hope ya understand~
Overall, I find this BDSM story rather interesting. It shows how bdsm play ought to be done. Whereby punishments are what they ought to be, befitting the 'crime' that was committed. Unlike many other bdsm stories, whereby the dom misuses his position and dishes out extreme punishments.
But then. It's still early on in the story. So I can't say much either. I'm hoping to see more aspects of bdsm displayed properly, like how you've been doing. This is really educational.
and hey, er, about that... that's not fair... how could he have stopped the dildo from slipping out of him?
should he have asked for permission to push it in more firmly so it wont fall out?
I won't say much now, since, we've yet to see what the punishment for 'mistreating the toy' would be.
And... about that bench... You could view it both ways. If the sub's really into pleasing his/her master (at that point of time). The bench would be a good thing to use, since it places him in a position he wants to be.
But if the sub's not ready (in the state of mind, or smthing) then the bench might only serve to increase the sub's fear/panic. eh? Double edge sword much? *shrugs*
Anyway, this is good. I hope readers who have a messed up opinion on what bdsm is about reads this story and learns a thing or two.
This is probably the best bdsm (properly written, educational) story I've read, since 'Depravity' (by ffpanda) so many years ago.
I wish you well for this, and I sincerely hope this story gets more recognized.
All the best! ^_^ I look forward to more (more variety in the many situations that may occur while scening) from you. *whispers* hope I'm not pressuring you or anything.. uuuh... yeah? *patpat* just, own time own target eh~
- nekoii
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*drops you a review coin* ^__^
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*drops you a review coin* ^__^
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November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! So hot! And I like that fact its not rape! Your doing a good job! keep it up!
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November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When did you say that you were going to loan Sir and subbie to me again? Oh! And I'll need that lovely bench they're using this chapter. Definitely don't wanna forget that! **drools on keyboard** Did I mention how freaking hawt this chapter was? Yeah, I'm pretty sure I might have a time or two. MORE PLEASE. Can I put my vote in for the knotted flogger? **looks around to make sure no one heard that, then turns puppy eyes back on Madrachadevii** You know you want to!! J/K ............... Maybe.
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's very hot *yum*
Torture the slave more XD
I'm looking forward to the update
Torture the slave more XD
I'm looking forward to the update
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh i likee! I dont tend to like BDSM fics, mainly because a lot of the ones i have read have been more about abuse and humiliation in a bad way. I think urs gets it jus right woth the obvious love the sub has for his Sir. It nice to read something from the famous Madrachavvi too, Pesterme2 raves about you and i have to agree. Cant wait to read more, i think i will check out ur profile as well. xxx
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I got ur name wrong, sorry! *hangs head in shame* xxxx
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol , Apparently ive already read ur other fic, and reviewed it. I must be losing the plot lol xx