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for Burning Incense

by lilsakura90

schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was very hot.I cant believe this is yr first time writing sth like that.
The sex scenes were written like a pro.
I hope you plan on updating,Id love to see what happens next.

person Kylee
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I have only read part one. I love it. Poor Darien is getting molested! Thanks for this lovely story.
person kylee
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had the best time reading this story. The dialogue is fabulous. Ryou is hilarious. The sex scenes were wonderful. Very good job writing this. This was my favorite line : “Holy shit Darien…your ass is so fucking tight. I don’t even know how I’m going to fit in there…” That one had me rolling on the floor. I am eager to see how these two are going to deal with their crazy affair. It seems like Ryou made a claiming bite. I can't wait to see what will happen.
person myth
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, this was hot! it had almost all of my favorite elements... best friends. check. 'straight'. check. married to the other's sister? checkcheckcheck XD
I was only EVER SO confused with the demon references. lol
person Narcoleptic
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com