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for The Subway Trip

by KiChan

person Hana
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my freaking god. This is awesome. I can't believe this story doesn't have the reviews behind it. Well written and well done! I'm not generally a fan of present tense in the pov of the reader, but man this story made it believable and encouraged the senses. Bravo.
person kit
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best written stories here. Very hot.
person NeverAwaken
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, I can't believe no one's reviewed this yet, this is really well done