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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so great!!! So now at least one of them knows about the abillity of the other!!! I'm really looking forward to the next part!!! I really have trouble with their names so it will probably allways be he in the reviews!!! Thanks a lot and see you soon!!!
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes this one is great!!! I want more!!! I have the feeling that this case is special somehow and because of that their abilitys are stronger!!! I really love this story!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was GREAT! Ok, so Aydenn (did I spell his name right?) can see Morgan and Morgan took him to where he was buried and he saw the fake Morgan trip over the body and take his ID. This story is so original; I don't know if I read a story on here about supernatural or paranormal issues. I love reading this stuff! I used to LOVE reading Stephen King and especially Dean Koontz; they're the masters of paranormal! Anyway, awesome chapter; I can't wait for the next one!
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Having Morgan's ghost in the story is great. I wondered how he felt about this whole thing. I guess he wants someone to investigate his murder and he is going to harass poor Aiydenn until he does something about it. As always Chaise is as cool as a cucumber. That boy is nuts! LOL. This story is very good. You must have had fun thinking it up. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so great again!!! I really can't wait to see where this is going and when they will tell eachother about their abilitys!!! See you!!!
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so confused! Ok, I just started reading this and it is extremely riveting! I'm hooked! Really creepy! I am confused tho: I thought Morgan was new to the area and hadn't started school yet. So, in chapter 2, how does this other kid, this other "medium" know Morgan?
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. The black hands are really scary. Chaise is a crazy boy. He has balls of steel. I can't imagine taking over someone's life. The police will think that he was the murderer and the real murderer is still out there. Hopefully this new person will be able to help figure out who the original killers were. I hope Chaise at least let his dad know that he is okay. Eager to read the next chapter.
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really interesting! It's something a bit different to a lot of the other stories out there. I love the paranormal slant and it flows well between the two characters. Looking forward to more chapters!
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow thats such a great start for a story!!! With the black hands thats so wicked!!! I really want to know what happens next!!! Will they be able to help eachother??? I really hope so cause they both have similar problems!!!! I hope that the next chappie will be up soon!!!! See you!!!