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for A Touch Dead

by ForeverAndEver

schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
don't work to hard. enjoy. up date soon.
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was assuming it was Chaise who called out to Aydenn. Because I thought that Morgan pretty much made Aydenn pass out. Yeah, good scene earlier; I wasn't sure if they were gonna be attracted to each other. The story took on such a cool, supernatural feel, I kinda forgot I was reading M/M! lol

I'm looking forward to the next chapter; hopefully Morgan's body will be there; what if it's not??????
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was really creepy w/Aydenn (I think I spelled it wrong again, sorry!), seeing his mom's death. I thought it really happened that morning! Does that mean that her heart attack will happen soon? That's really creepy! I sure hope Aydenn gets better; it seems like he's not even gonna make it thru the night...
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank you both. up date soon.
person smint45
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly fantastic!!! They finally know of eachother!!! I can't wait for the grave diggin!!! I really hope to see you soon!!!!
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person smint45
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so great!!!!! I absloutly love this story!!! And I can't wait for the next chappie!!!! Aiydenn is really fucked in this chappie!!! Poor guy!!! I hope they will be able to help eachother!!! I can't wait for more!!! Thanky for the great chappie!!! See you soon!!!!
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG,poor Aydenn! Having to have those thoughts and feelings and never being able to fully fall asleep. And having to see Morgan's ghost all the time, and having to deal w/the ghost constantly wrecking havoc in Aydenn's life. I hope Chaise finally tells Aydenn what he knows.
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice story
person Lisa
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. And don't worry about updates; this story is so good that I for one, don't mind waiting for updates! I love the fact that Aydenn (shoot, I did it again, didn't I?) Aiydenn, shit, I forgot, I'm sorry. Anyway, I love the fact that the poor guy (there, how's that? lol) has visions of Morgan all the time. Of course Morgan will haunt him (actually, I'm surprised Morgan isn't haunting Chaise!) b/c he died prematurely and his soul is stuck in the abyss that's the inbetween. In between this world and the other world. Ok, so I used to read a lot of Dean Koontz!!!! lol