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by ForeverAndEver

schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, so glad you're back! XD

Poor Aydenn; I would HATE, HATE, HATE to have visions like that! And these were visions in the future; has he had any visions in the future before? And what a waste of the vision if he didn't even have time to save the poor guy!

Can't wait for the next chapter; hope they find Jenna!
person midnightsweet
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
next chapter soon please.
person midnightsweet
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another great one. working is a bitch. lol lol
person smint45
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was such a great chappie again!!!! I'm so happy you updated!!!! I hope they will get to solve this and by the way perhaps get to deal with their special abilitys!!!! I think they still don't know enough of eachother so I hope you will get even closer!!!! You are doing a great work it really is natural how their relationship develops!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!
person midnightsweet1@yahoo.com
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
keep them coming.
person smint45
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
These two chappies were great!!! I really liked them!!!! It seems they are getting closer to the case and closer to eachother!!! I hope to hear from you soon!!!
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see this updated! I thought you forgot all about it! lol

Yeah, Lost is a GREAT show; I'm sorry to see it end! Actually last season was the first season where I WASN'T lost trying to follow it!!! It was also so interesting w/all the time warps and such.

Anyway, back to the review: poor Aydenn, having to go thru all that stuff w/Morgan throwing things around all the time; so frustrating. Hopefully they can finally figure out what happened to him and why.

I look forward to the next chapter!
person kylee123
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy New Year and thanks for the new chapter. I am sad for Aiydenn with his mother's death. He is all alone in the world. Chaise is also kind of in limbo. He is staying in Morgan's house but of course he will not be able to stay there forever. I wish they could at least tell Morgan that they were trying to help him. Maybe Morgan would torment Aiydenn less if he knew that Aiydenn was working to help him. The story is really heating up. I am eager to see what happens next.
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter! Yeah, sometimes I'm forgetting I'm reading a M/M story! ahahhahha Anyway, I am totally confused now: I thought Aydenn's mom (did I spell his name right this time?) was drunk and sleeping when he was jacking off the night before. When did she die? What did I miss? I better re-read the chapter again.


Ok, well, can't wait for the next update; altho Aydenn should have insisted that Chaise sleep in the bed also! lol

Happy New Year!
person smint45
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chappie!!! Can't wait for the touching images findout thing in the next chappie!!! Hope Aydienne (is he spelled right??) is ok and is not going to be hurt to much!!!! Hope you have a nice holiday and see you soon!!!