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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please please continue! you have me hooked in! i almost cried when i reached the last chap. :(
criticisms- none at the moment ;)
criticisms- none at the moment ;)
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This couple is such an interesting match. I cannot imagine being in a relationship with someone who could read your mind. You would have to be totally honest all the time. No room for tact or diplomacy. I am glad that you will be posting more. Great story.
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am very glad that we will be seeing more of Beautiful Goodbye. I love Jay and Roy. They make a great couple. I can't wait to find out what Jay is hiding from Roy. The memories must be pretty strong if he does not want to share them. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this chapter. Jay and Roy are an awesome couple. The mind reading plus comversation is really fun to read. Jay keeps thinking all these sexy things about Roy. His ego is going to be sky high. Plus I wonder who is really behind setting the two groups to kill each other. I am really enjoying the story. Please keep up the good writing.
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so soon and for the glossary, it's really helpful ^^ Interesting characters. Can't wait to meet Ceasar ;-)
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. I think it is hilarious that the members from both teams have paired up already. Very interesting. I am looking forward to your next update.
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. They all have supernatural powers? I am eager to read more. I love the sex scenes.
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You were right, the summary sucks ;-) If it hadn't been for the promise of yummy sex I wouldn't have looked at it.
So I hadn't been expecting to find an actual story and characters inside. Really, I like it. Although it's a bit confusing, especially with the ever changing point of view.
Very interesting characters, great dialogues.
Hope you'll update soon.
So I hadn't been expecting to find an actual story and characters inside. Really, I like it. Although it's a bit confusing, especially with the ever changing point of view.
Very interesting characters, great dialogues.
Hope you'll update soon.