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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I related the two characters for Asurie and Master very well to another two characters in the tv show Legend of the Seeker, which I adore. Their names are Darken Rahl, http://media.photobucket.com/image/darken%20rahl/raigraphixs/DarkenRahl.jpg and Rachel http://www.childstarlets.com/lobby/bios/portraits/jordana_beatty12.jpg . She's an innocent little child and Rahl's a deceiving power-hungry tyrant, but he has his moments... It's a little horrible because Rachel's just a young girl, but if you ever see and picture this, maybe you'll see what I mean...
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is very well-written and creative! It has a plot and everything you promised in the summary. It also has really interesting twists and I can't wait for more. I also would like for Asurie's master to win the little party game. By the way, doesn't he have a name?? As we know the other master, or mistress's already...
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I RARELY ever review anything on this site (I know, all you other authors out there hate me for it), but damn. So hot. You have got one hell of an imagination and aren't ashamed to share it with us. Thank you!
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know that I'm the only person who is reviewing this story but I don't care. I love this story!!! I love the heroine...and I like the master a little bit too because for the most part, even his pain brings pleasure to his slave (EXCEPT for the part with the dog). I'm glad that he doesn't beat her. Yet. But I feel that if she continues to defy him, he will turn as cruel as some of the other masters she witnessed. Even tho she succumbs to that humiliation, she felt pleasure.
This story is great!!!
Linda
This story is great!!!
Linda
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story as it keeps getting better and better!!! No matter what her master puts her through, Asurie still has the strength to endure whatever he does to her. No matter how twisted, perverted and painful it is, he has not broken her spirit completely. PLEASE continue and update soon!
Linda
Linda
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've posted and removed two other reviews as I felt they didn't convey my true feelings about this story. I got it right in this one.
As I was reading this chapter, I found myself squirming in my seat....partly because of the graphic dark elements of this story and also because despite it's dark nature, it is very erotic as well. I was glad to see that your story didn't involve as much of the usual mindless sex (although that is always a very good thing!) but that the sub also had a mind of her own, a temper and a backbone. What a delightful and refreshing combination in a submissive. I loved it! She certainly wasn't afraid to lash out at her master for his humiliating treatment of her. I also liked the fact that unlike most Dom/sub stories, the man shared her with others. Your story is very refreshing because it adds some new elements to the Dom/sub that I thoroughly enjoyed.
I hope you update soon and often!
Linda
As I was reading this chapter, I found myself squirming in my seat....partly because of the graphic dark elements of this story and also because despite it's dark nature, it is very erotic as well. I was glad to see that your story didn't involve as much of the usual mindless sex (although that is always a very good thing!) but that the sub also had a mind of her own, a temper and a backbone. What a delightful and refreshing combination in a submissive. I loved it! She certainly wasn't afraid to lash out at her master for his humiliating treatment of her. I also liked the fact that unlike most Dom/sub stories, the man shared her with others. Your story is very refreshing because it adds some new elements to the Dom/sub that I thoroughly enjoyed.
I hope you update soon and often!
Linda