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I don't normally comment on stories. (The ADD kicks in and I'm often back to searching for something fun to read.) But your story just ... grabbed me. How screwed up am I to find so much in common with Brett?? Anyway. I'm curious about Janos and his six armed race. I also want to know what exactly Brett is and why he freaks out 'humans' so badly.

Can I just say I want to backhand Tucker soooo bad?? He's such a prissy bitch and boy pussy? Really? Ugh. I sooo hate that term!

this is a really good story and i hope that you update really soon i was wondering why miles was feeling that way about brett and why this guy was looking for him it honestly never crossed my mind that brett could be from some other world......but i guess that would explain miles aversion to being close to brett for long periods oof time and how everyone eventually leaves him alone after awhile......im just curious to know what exactly is he if he isntt human???? until next time i cant wait for your next update i was wondering if you could like give me some kind of heads up so that i know when you do update. i'm new on here so dont really knoe how it works email is coliver922@yahoo.com thanks i would really appreciate it

Oh My Gosh! Im so happy I found your story again! =D
It was on my old computer, which needs a new part, and I could not remember the name of this fic; so when I accidently found it again you can only imagaion my joy!!! This definatly deserves more reviews and I hope to contribute, I can't wait for the next chapter, please, please, please update soon! ~Passing Reader

I just finished Chapter 2 and I have to tell you that this is an awesome story! It is very well written. I think the term "boy pussy" gets first prize for hilarity. I got a good laugh out of that one. I am so sorry for Brett. He is repelling everyone he comes across. The idea for this story is something I have thought about often. What if you were trying to find someone like your soulmate in a strange world. How long would it take? It would seem like an almost impossible task. Please keep up the good writing. I am off to read chapter 3 but I can't wait for an update.

Hurray! Janos finally finds his master and gets to clean up. I already love him and his six arms. I am glad that Brett did not call the cops. Janos has already suffered enough. I am so eager to read the next chapter of this great story. Please update soon.

This is entirely cute and so very original. I really enjoyed reading it and I hope you'll update soon! I can't wait to see how Jonas will manage in Brett's life until he'll agree to leave.
And the six arms surprised me. I also like the face that Brett is seemingly not that attractive!

Wow, I am really liking this story. I love how you did the prologue from Janos' point of view. And I can't wait to see more Miles; I feel bad for him!

oh this is nice and long, this is what i call i good story nice plot and good, Janos sounds hot lol i dont know why but he dose lol and poor brett i fell for him i cant wait for your next update

Cute story, but I was a little irritated by all the quotes in the beginning. He didn't get talked to by a "manager," he got talked to by a manager--there's no hidden meaning there. I'm just being picky, but it irks me when people do that in real life too--air quotes don't represent disdain, it's a wink-wink-nudge-nudge-get-what-I'm-really-saying type of thing--implying that what you're air-quoting isn't really what you mean.
Ok, phew sorry, for the rant, I like the premise though. Keep at it

Hon, I'm simply going to kidnap you and lock you away to satisfy all of my perversities with your awesome writing abilities. ^_^