AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Alpha and Omega

by MadMaxxCoyote

person little dude
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I usually reread this story if I'm bored or I read another story that really pised me off. I think it's a little early to say this but I rooting for a brett/janos pairing how could you not love a cute acting hot guy with six arms. I would love to see fanart of these two because for some reason I have a hard time picturing what Brett looks like.Anyways please update soon.
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I remembered reading it a while back and it took me forever to find this.
person Arbon
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I like that this is a sci-fi type story, but I can't help but notice that it's been a while since your last update. Are you planning on finishing it or putting it on hiatus. I'd love to hear more about Brett's people and Janos, I'm glad he's not suffering no more, poor guy. So is Brett's real appearance like a disguise or something to shield him from other humans?
person Lemony Goodness
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Oh! I want to know more about Janos, he seems...unique amongst other things about the story. You laid down a lot of mysteries that need to be discovered and I can't wait for the next chapter. Is Brett really unattractive or is he under a glamor of some sort? What kind of powers does he has? How many servants? Will he go like super saiyan level three or something? lol. Just kidding, can't wait until the next chapter
person wolfi3
schedule May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please more.

=D
person lynngreg
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, this is an awesome story so far!!
person WantSome
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you'll be continuing with this one soon. I really enjoyed the Janos pov prologue, and all the characters seemed well developed and real. I'm totally intrigued to see what happens next, and what Brett makes of the whole situation. Please update soon, yeah?
person arya
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, I think that i'm actually becoming a fan. You really do have talent for writing. The past chapters of this story has been really good. The plot is interesting. I don't usually like to read uncompleted stories (because they are often abandoned), but after reading three of your other stories, i wanted to read more. Hey, do you happen to watch anime like ai no kusabi,junjou romantica, or gauken heaven? Because your writing has that sensual quality. Either way, i hope that you will write the next chapter very soon. I'm just not very patient i guess, as you can probably guess by me not reading uncompleted stories. Either way, you have talent.
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Hopefully you continue to write and plot as well as you have in the first three chapters, no pressure lol.

I really like how you made Brett unappealing, as apposed to every man/woman/object humping his leg. It's refreashing to see someone who writes extremely well. Poor Janos, he is so cute. <3 =^__^=

(insert mandatory 'Upd8 nowz plox!!!!!111!2' line)
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love it when a story leaves me thirsting for more. And this story has done just that...I really like how the main character seems off how did you put it 'like clay' that leaves so much to the imagination as to what he will look like when he leaves the lovely planet earth. So I look forward to with great anticipation for the next installement.