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Thanks so much for updating what an amazing chapter

This is fantastic! I really love this and I hope we get chapter 6 very soon!

Whoa! I wonder how Brett would feel if he found out he was the one responsible for his (sorta)parents death. I look forward to more! I wanna see what else he can do!

Dude, you are absolutely cruel to take this long to update. I friggin' adore this story because of how interesting and unique it is, and it's a damn shame you don't get more reviews. People are totally missing out. :(

Even though we found out the reason Brett's parents have decided disown him, I still couldn't help but feel a bit of satisfaction with their deaths. I think they have hurt Brett beyond repair; much more than any bully, stranger, or "friend" ever could, so I'm kind of glad they died with such terror. Brett needs a hug and he needs comforting, and I hope Janos will be the one to do that (without getting a electric shock, as Greg had described).

Thank you for updating this story, and I really hope you find the time and motivation to release more chapters more often. :D

Lovely story, the characters are quite expressive and the plot is paced quite nicely. A few spelling errors here and there, but nothing a good once over wont fix (like I'm one to talk lol) ;) Over all an enticing piece of fiction, I can't wait for more! Please keep up the hard work!

Wow...I'm totally intrigued
Here's hoping you continue this =)

I'm dying to know what happens next! Please continue the story it's really interesting so far.

This story is truly amaxing.
I love the humor and the plot. You really have a way with words .
I just can't wait for the next chapter :)

It's been bugging me for a while what exactly is brett both in race and political position? Janos said he isn't a prince, that and being a prince was lowly, I'm assuming he is higher up than a king. Also is the brett we see know his true form, or does he have some kind of spell on him to make him look human? One of the reasons i'm assuming this is because when janos speaks in his native language it hurts brett. The metal bondage kinda makes me sad since i was looking forward to seeing janos and brett hook up darn.

You come up with such amazing characters, can't wait for the next ch!