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Sweet Evil Jesus, AppleGreenSea! This is my third story I've read by you and my esteem only goes up and up! What unique stories you have! And so short! I can't stop! *is addicted to you now, but fearful of the forthcoming withdrawal because I only see one more story left on your list here at Adultfanfiction! *

I don't think I've ever read a masturbation scene quite like this! Very unique! And I completely 'get it' in my own personal way!

I like how you play with the expectations of the reader right at the beginning. What one would assume is fear of having his 'face broke' is actually the arousal-shame of being called a sissy...

Excellent, succinct description of aesthetics in your stories; I could hear the crinkle of the unwrapping, feel the burn of shame! Actually, the shame is almost a palpable thing...A little synesthesia of sensations!

The power of society shaping our thoughts so that we are even shamed in our homes--alone and private--and we truly believe our natural instinct "disgusting" is indeed a terrible thing. That is why I especially loved this sentence:

"But all the shame in the world was not succeeding in talking him out of it."

P.S. "He hadn’t let it grow long since he was about ten, and he would never grow it out again . . ." Is there a story there...?

By the by, although I read the Aaron stories out of order, they both stand alone beautifully! This one only gave me more depth to why Aaron got off so hard on being called a girl slut in "Yes, Teacher." Finally a man who knows and accepts what he wants...and boy does Nick deliver!

That was quite a good story and I really enjoyed it. I hope to hear more about this character, and hope he explores this little kink of his much further. :3 My, it would be hot if he found someone to help him investigate this dark side of himself.

I am so glad that I decided to click on this story. I really liked it and would love to read more. You have a nice writing style and I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes (which happens a lot, as I'm sure you know, and they just get in the way of the story) so keepup the good work and post some more!

I definitely want to read more of this. It's one of the most original stories I have come by in a while.

more of this story! i dunno where your takeing it but hells yeah i like it

Very interesting story. The whole time, I felt so sorry for Aaron because of his kinky secret. I hope this story will have a sequel soon because it's just that good!

The story is great. I love it. I would love to read more.

I'd love to see more of Aaron. Hopefully he'll start accepting himself and stop being so ashamed :)