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for Alhad

by Draeconin

schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I thought in ch. 2 they decided that Pirya (is that how it's spelled?) was moving in. I thought Bradley was going to hire a contractor to make her a suite or something.

Anyway, it's good that Bradley and Alhad are getting closer! Ha, no pun intended! I'm really enjoying the story, altho sometimes I find it hard to believe that Bradley speaks so maturely. I know he has a lot of responsiblity and he's been on his own for quite awhile, but still; he's only 22.
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a fascinating story! So original! I love it! Is there more? I hope so!

I can't believe Bradley spanked Alhad right in front of his mother!!! That was pretty bold of him! And I can't believe his mom justs sits there and is now letting Bradley discipline her son. It's a very interesting story.
person kylee123
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bradley is such a perv. He definitely has a spanking fetish! Funny!
person kylee123
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alhad is very interesting. Good writing. I love it. I would love to read some more. I wonder how much attraction Bradley feels for Alhad. Is he really falling in love or is Priva forcing her son on him? Bradley admitted that he is attracted to Alhad but he doesn't seem to be overwhelmingly attracted. I also wonder if and how Bradley is going to court Alhad or is Ahlad going to court Bradley? I can't wait to read the next chapter.