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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
reviewing chapter 2
he spanked alhad while his mother was still in the room?!?!?!?!? O_O I'm a bit...... uhm. shocked....
O_O
but all in all, i like the idea of this... predestined thing... but again. i can't help but have my suspicions that things are moving a little... too fast?
he spanked alhad while his mother was still in the room?!?!?!?!? O_O I'm a bit...... uhm. shocked....
O_O
but all in all, i like the idea of this... predestined thing... but again. i can't help but have my suspicions that things are moving a little... too fast?
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter 3
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm~ so they are moving in. and alhad's behavior is much much more different than when we started.
but......
hmm yeah....
constructive criticism wise. i hope something exciting will happen soon.
XD
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm~ so they are moving in. and alhad's behavior is much much more different than when we started.
but......
hmm yeah....
constructive criticism wise. i hope something exciting will happen soon.
XD
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter 6
yes finally!!! something i have been waiting for.
information about their past lives! argh... i've been waiting for this. thank you.
yes finally!!! something i have been waiting for.
information about their past lives! argh... i've been waiting for this. thank you.
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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated so quickly! I didn't finish the chapter yet, just got to the Toyota Prius part and had to laugh! Isn't Toyota recalled tons of cars, the Prius being one of them????? lol
And bt dubs: the Mazdas are really good cars. My son has a Mazda 6 and it has air bags all over it, and good gas mileage. Much better than my mid-size SUV!
Ok, gonna finish the chapter now!
And bt dubs: the Mazdas are really good cars. My son has a Mazda 6 and it has air bags all over it, and good gas mileage. Much better than my mid-size SUV!
Ok, gonna finish the chapter now!
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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lack of interest? I thought lots of people were reading this! It's such a great story! I'm sad to see it come to an end. I'm glad Brad and Alhad were able to get married and I do hope they live a long happy life in this lifetime! lol
You're an excellent writer and I truly enjoyed this story. Good luck with any other stories you write and I will be happy to read your other stories.
You're an excellent writer and I truly enjoyed this story. Good luck with any other stories you write and I will be happy to read your other stories.
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February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new chapter! I don't like to comment on a story until I've had a chance to get into it a bit, and I've definately gotten into this one. Thanks for posting.:)
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February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you definitely HAVE to finish this story! It's great! Poor Alhad getting all jealous of Ned. Hopefully Ned will keep his mouth shut.
Good chapter; I'm glad Alhad had a good birthday! Now, if only he was two years older! Hahahah
Good chapter; I'm glad Alhad had a good birthday! Now, if only he was two years older! Hahahah
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February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aaaaawwwww now how is Ned suppose to continue being a friend? when his number got shredded?
hey Im enjoying your story... please continue.
hey Im enjoying your story... please continue.
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January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, this last part was great!!!! I too, went looking for a used car for my oldest and he fell in love w/the Mazda 6. So, that's what he has. I did tons of research and found it was one of the safest cars, loaded w/airbags.
Ok, on to the review: good chapter; they seem to be getting so much done for Alhad's emancipation. Priceless explanation to his mom when he was five tho! Had me cracking up!!!!
Ok, on to the review: good chapter; they seem to be getting so much done for Alhad's emancipation. Priceless explanation to his mom when he was five tho! Had me cracking up!!!!
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boy, that must have been freaky; for Brad to read about the Prince and his "helper". So now he really believes Alhad. It must be the oddest feeling to have a fleeting memory of a time when you weren't even born! Amazing. I definitely believe in past lives and reincarnation.
One thing I was confused at was the fact that Brad had them both tested for STD's. While it's totally admirable, I thought Alhad was a virgin and I thought Brad hadn't gotten any for a very long time. So his test should come out negative, right?
One thing I was confused at was the fact that Brad had them both tested for STD's. While it's totally admirable, I thought Alhad was a virgin and I thought Brad hadn't gotten any for a very long time. So his test should come out negative, right?