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for Sin's Fall

by DyingInBlack

person aFan
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! REALLY well written! Hope you update sooon~! XDXDXD
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, no problem! I'm finding the story so fascinating! I love everything about the movie industry, and like I said before, everything that goes into making a movie, is just amazing! Amazing that movies even come out!!! lol


Anyway, great chapter; here's hoping Mike doesn't cave in and cancel Johnny! Maybe (hopefully) with the arrival of that Giles guy, he'll take one look at Johnny and agree w/Mike that he has to be the lead singer!
person Alichino
schedule April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love your story plz continue!
person windsandstars
schedule April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ive never read a story like this before are all the members going to make appearances? Cant wait for you to continue :)
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! I really like this story! It's not your typical story you see on here and I love rock bands, and I love Hollywood, so it's a win-win for me!

People don't realize how much work it takes to put out a movie, from getting studio financing, to casting, to writing, editing, etc., etc. It's amazing movies ever get made! So for me, it's fascinating reading about all the steps in movie making! Great job!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was just reading thru your profile and noticed you're the author of that great gay wedding planning agency fic! I LOVE that story!!! When are you going to update that???? (Hint, hint) lol
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this story! I hope you continue with it. One comment tho: you need commas! Your sentence structure was good, but it really need commas! Sometimes it was hard to distinguish the different thoughts in one sentence w/o the commas.

Other than that; great story; I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person clovermax
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Johnny -wonder what made him decide to try acting.Like the idea of a mystery and a romance.
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I'm really interested to see where you're going with this. So glad Johnny made the callback after all!