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please update!!! please please please. it is a great story and i am dying to know what happens

love your story. please update

Very nice. Who'd have thought demons would have such depth. Besides that being so hot and needy. I guess everything has it's needs. Swelling tails. Ouch.

Your writing style leaves me in awe. It also makes me harbor a twinge of jealousy at your skill and detailed vocabulary.
I always feel confident in my own work but it seems to pale in comparison to your own. I have so much more to learn...

I would like to ask your advice on an my own work as well because of the helpful review you gave me earlier. If you are so inclined why not send me a message in the forums.

Excellently done. Though a little to cut and crisp on the whole reveal, it did serve a nice purpose. Can't decide whether or not Sable is the main villian, he sure doesn't play the role well. He's mentally-cunning enough, but lacking the evil. I loved, LOVED, the fight scene. Gosh that was simply beautiful, it's been so long since my last gore-fest. Thank you for reminding me the wonders of violence. In a way, don't you think sex and fighting are often alike? Anyways, I know for sure that I hate Alex, she seems to be a royal-pain, personally. Too self-righteous. As for Luc, I like her for her imperfections. I think the ones we love the most are the ones are we can relate the most to. Anyways, thanks for the up-date, can't wait for the next chapter!

wow. One of these days I may find a new way to begin a review for your story, but for now please induldge my apparent lack of creativity. It was the first word out of my mouth after reading. I'm just as impressed with this chapter as I was with your last one. Again, it's really well written, your characters are becoming nicely rounded and even if the premise is a little cliche, I'm loving it. I certainly hope you continue. Thanks for upadating.

It is a very interesting and good beginning. You've given enough detail to make it easy to follow and I'm curious to see how you plan to develop it. It's also a dark story and personally I have a soft spot dark stories, I wonder how dark it will be, will it have a happy ending or a tragic one? I guess I'll wait and see.

I have to say, I'm really not a fan of demons and myths, etc, but as soon as I'd read the first sentence, I was hooked. The characters are described so perfectly in such great depth that it was hard not to fall in love with them. I'm desperate to read more, it was fantastic.

Brilliant, well thought, and cunning. I love your characters and the realism you've managed to intergrade. The plot is decent, a little cliche but very refreshing under the thick pile of poor or minimal plot. To be honest, I love it. It's captivating and absolutely beautiful. It was like reading a novel next to a fireplace while lazing on cozy pillows. Definite favourite. Please continue. Please publish. Please.

This was quite the enchanting story. I'm extremely interested in what will happen, so please, do continue!

And if its any help, this is the first time I've felt compelled to review a story on AFF. (: