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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story :) Hope to see you continue this!
Cos I really wonder what Sable will do, and what you intend to do with the human host...?
Cos I really wonder what Sable will do, and what you intend to do with the human host...?
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June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, okay! I'm finally reviewing! :D
Okay, first off, I have to say that Lucetta is fucking sexy! Rawr, I would definitely like to have her over some time. ;) And I do like Miss Proserpine as well; she's a little doll, hehe. I loved how Lucetta came and rescued Proserpine in the first chapter but was disappointed that they didn't smex each other up! Like during the bath? I really wanted to see some Lucetta-groping-Proserpine's-breasts action, you know? ;)
Then the second chapter I was a little upset that Alecto and Alexandria showed up because I KNEWWW that they were going to interfere with Lucetta and Proserpine's soon-to-be relationship. Fuuuuudge. However, I do like Alecto; her witty responses are sassy and make me giggle. Alexandria, though, just seems so... plain, but beautiful, too. The erotic scene between Alecto and Lucetta made me mad, too. Not because it was bad, no! Quite the contrary, it was very nice. :) But I wanted Lucetta's first real sex scene in the story to be with Proserpine, duh. ;p
Now the third chapter was interesting. I have to admit, I'm not sure where you're headed with the girl-host that's now bound to Alecto, but I'm intrigued, nonetheless. And sweet little Ariel being the Angel really shocked me! Way to not be predictable! ;D Again, there was another smut scene with Lucetta and Alecto towards the end, but I liked this one more than the first -- I think because it was more a make-love-to-me scene rather than fuck-me-to-fix-me sex, yeah? PS - It's so obvious that Proserpine looooooves Lucetta 'cause the first thing she asked after getting up from after the attack was about if Lucetta was okay/alive. "UM YEAH SHE IS NOW GO KISS HER AND STUFF!" I think I said but... yeah, that was an in-the-moment ordeal.
Anyway, I like it! :) The characters are very interesting and the demonology just makes it that more weird but cool. I'm looking forward to a Lucetta/Proserpine scene in the near future, so don't let me down! ;D
Beautiful work, hun! Update when you can 'cause I'll be waiting! :)
Okay, first off, I have to say that Lucetta is fucking sexy! Rawr, I would definitely like to have her over some time. ;) And I do like Miss Proserpine as well; she's a little doll, hehe. I loved how Lucetta came and rescued Proserpine in the first chapter but was disappointed that they didn't smex each other up! Like during the bath? I really wanted to see some Lucetta-groping-Proserpine's-breasts action, you know? ;)
Then the second chapter I was a little upset that Alecto and Alexandria showed up because I KNEWWW that they were going to interfere with Lucetta and Proserpine's soon-to-be relationship. Fuuuuudge. However, I do like Alecto; her witty responses are sassy and make me giggle. Alexandria, though, just seems so... plain, but beautiful, too. The erotic scene between Alecto and Lucetta made me mad, too. Not because it was bad, no! Quite the contrary, it was very nice. :) But I wanted Lucetta's first real sex scene in the story to be with Proserpine, duh. ;p
Now the third chapter was interesting. I have to admit, I'm not sure where you're headed with the girl-host that's now bound to Alecto, but I'm intrigued, nonetheless. And sweet little Ariel being the Angel really shocked me! Way to not be predictable! ;D Again, there was another smut scene with Lucetta and Alecto towards the end, but I liked this one more than the first -- I think because it was more a make-love-to-me scene rather than fuck-me-to-fix-me sex, yeah? PS - It's so obvious that Proserpine looooooves Lucetta 'cause the first thing she asked after getting up from after the attack was about if Lucetta was okay/alive. "UM YEAH SHE IS NOW GO KISS HER AND STUFF!" I think I said but... yeah, that was an in-the-moment ordeal.
Anyway, I like it! :) The characters are very interesting and the demonology just makes it that more weird but cool. I'm looking forward to a Lucetta/Proserpine scene in the near future, so don't let me down! ;D
Beautiful work, hun! Update when you can 'cause I'll be waiting! :)
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!
and i love how long it is, great chapter as always
:DDDD
angels! awsome!
and i love how long it is, great chapter as always
:DDDD
angels! awsome!
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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thank you thank you thank you for the update!!!!! squeee!!! *happy dances around room*
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Three chapters and three successes (tosses hat) I haven't been around for a while so I was quite happy to come back and find that you hadn't abandoned this story. It's very compelling, and growing more so with each update. I like the pacing you've set for Proserpine and Lucetta. You're not forcing it and yet you're still managing to keep the story very hot. Not that I'm only trying to feed your ego in exchange for updates, but Virulent Sublimity is definately one of the better stories on this site and one of the few reasons that I bother to visit aff anymore. Thanks again and good luck with your writing.
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love love love wow just wow i am in love with this story!!! your style of writing is amazingly professional and descriptive. And um i think i love you
please update.
please update.
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow this was such a good read I'm not normally into demons, supernatural or such but this was just crazily good, cant wait for more. :)
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really well thought out and written. I love the depth of it all. Would love to read more, if there is more to read?
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update? please?
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November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more!!