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for Ghali's Story

by minkabi

person cris
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh thank goodness there is still a piece about Ghali i always wanted to know what happened in the desert with him. Poor Ghali :) i love the guy he has some backbone.
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like Ghali´s story, but please can you write Caddy´s story too?
person maloanne
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am happy you wrote about them. I a was wondering about Ghali.
Bye
M
person Avernion
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I think I'm going to cry T-T A continuation! That's so great! A have been wondering about those two. But why didn't Anders make the claim? I thought he loved Gahli (or how ever you spell his name...). Was he just naive and stupid or was there some other reason?
You know, if you want to do a continuation about Caddy too, that would be so awesome. The little brat is kind of braking my heart. I just still don't think all of this is that little boys fault (TnT) Does Anders hate him now?
person J42
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow - an update so soon!! :-) You're right, it's fascinating what's brewing in your head. And thanks, this is riveting indeed! Not sure if I'm reading this correctly. Can Ghali actually have kids? Won't his value be diminished, and potentially complicate marital ties, that Azim also knows it doesn't pass on to the next generation? More about Azim would also be interesting... who is this guy with the strange accent? :-)
person CJ
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it. I need more.
person miles
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning ! More please ^^
person L.S.
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Azim... lol what a strange desert man.
person me
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story so far! i can't wait for the update
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad you are writing this side of the story because I was dying to know what was going on with Ghali while reading August. I have to agree with some of your other reviewers that you should also consider writing a short story about Cadmus.