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Spirited Ghali!! ;-) Give Azim a run for his money! ;-) Nice character development!

oh shit...things will not end well for him lol

Oh no, maybe that's why the Sheik had to beat Ghali...ack.

yay! A chase, I love those you always know how to keep the heat racing. I'm glad to learn more about Ghali he seemed to always be in the shadows, so knowing him now has been a delight. [He always deserved better than Anders + Caddy]

Ghali, I'm crossing my fingers for you, even though I highly doubt your escape... But, go, go!

You know, I kicked myself once I finally read August. I'd never looked at it, because Mpreg is usually one of my dealbreaking squicks, However, when I finally read it I realized that it was about so much more, that there were so many deep themes - I was impressed and enthralled.

I'm so glad you're doing Ghali's story now. He was one of my favorite characters, and I like him even better now. He's courageous. I'm looking forward to finding out what happened behind the scenes, and to seeing how he came out of it with such quiet dignity.

ooooh, well all i can say maybe with him out of the way caddy can get what he wants >__> granted that happening is slim and who knows i mean caddy could be just crushing and not sure what he feels but yeah anyways yaaay! i love your writings and they're so original though i still think doms in your world are very abusive 'sad face'

Well, I guess that explains why Anders wasn't particularly upset when Ghali disappeared and no one tried very hard (or really at all) to recover him. Though it rather lowers my estimation of Anders that he'd let Ghali go through a change and then lose interest in him. It makes me wonder if Henrik actually offered Ghali up for to the Sheik as a way of building an alliance, which would make him rather scummy.

Great chapter on Ghali who are you strange desert man? In August I was a little confused if he actually had any desire for Ghali because when he spoke of Ghali it was almost condescending...I wonder about Anders as well, I'm sure he didn't make the claim because of Cadmus, but other then that I really see no point in continuing their story it was all Cadmus fault [even the Caddy fans know, but dont want to admit :)] can't wait for an update and I hope you have time to continue your other stories I've been dying to know more about our ex-priest carrier and Ivan.

OOhh. You are soo fast!!

Now that I'm getting a glimpse into Ghali's mind, I feel so bad for him. Did he truly change because he wanted to or did he think that it would keep Anders close to him? Gosh, I'm gonna say that Anders is an asshole but maybe Anders did want to propose but felt the time wasn't right..or there were too many people that would be hurt by it...but for now, Anders is a stupid Anders. How old is the sheik? By the description of his glasses, I'm thinking 50+..eww, I hope he isn't an old man!