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for Ghali's Story

by minkabi

person Anon
schedule December 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know it has been a long time since you last updated with new stories, but Ghali's story does not seem to have been really completed. Won't you please continue with a sequel on his life with his husband, his baby hopefully? Your writing is awesome.
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ouh.... were you editing? The chapter sometimes pops out at the Latest page when editing occurs.
Ah well, I thought Ghali's story was continueing. *sad*
is it really the end?
He's been such a favorite character, such excitement and story, I'm greedy for more DX
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story a lot. Is this truly the end of it?
person Trigger
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope Ghali slits that mother fucker's throat while he sleeps. It disturbs me how he rationalizes Azim's behavior at the end and decides that this is what he wanted. Beating and rape by a giant douche bag. Rii-ight. I feel intensely sorry for any children fathered in this relationship. Kill him, Ghali. Fuck that asshole up. (ignore me. I can't reach through the computer and rip Azim's head off with my own teeth like I really really REALLY want to, so it comes out as a temper tantrum.)
person Rosei
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!

Superlative!!! Beautiful descriptions throughout!!!!

Thank you!!!
R
person nivell
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, the description of the beating made me shudder in horror, disgust and sympathy. Poor Ghali having to experience that..well, at least he won't get beaten that badly ever again. Glad that you explained the reason why Ghali and Anders wouldn't have worked out..it makes sense. Can't wait for your future stories!
person miles
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh ! The end ? Too bad ! I loved this story...
person Avernion
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I really liked this story. Somehow, it even managed to end with a sweet taste, just slightly disrupted yet increased by Azim's last sentence.
person TB
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a short, but powerful story! Enjoyed it very much - thanks!
person tf
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Since I know he doesn't make it, I hope his punishment is too bad; thanks for the update!