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Keep it up, you have me hooked! Post!!!!!

just read your latest chapter and i'm still loving the story! also, congrats on the skow nom. what an honor! i hope you win!!!

Congrats on the nomination. Good luck with it. :D

Nice chapter. Finally they are realising their feelings for each other.

I just need to start this review by telling you that your stories have made me finally register with this site. I figured I check daily to see if you've updated, so I might as well become a member. Again, great update. This chapter made me really appreciate the people in Sera and Griffin's lives. People who are honest and loyal. I loved how Sera could have a conversation with Zoe and fill in the moments of silence. I loved Gwen and how calm and insightful she was as a third-party. But, my favorite was Finn. There was something so great about getting his flirt on and then backing out. He even admits that it's only for Griffin and that he will only do it once. That's the best, most honest response from someone into her, but tight with his friend. Can't wait for more...like Griffin's past, and Sera's reaction to Gwen. Keep the updates coming!

You are so brilliant. Haven't been reading many 'Originals' lately (probably b/c I'm not into M/M and the rest are...mostly crap), but I'm soo glad I came across another one of your stories (Brier Wood is in my 'favorites')! You are so talented and your stories are so captivating.
And, seriously, American Indian men are so delicious! haha I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks so.
I'm excited to read the rest! Cheers!

omggggggggggg I have waited sooo long for this chapter!!! It's such an amazing story!!! Please update soon! Don't leave us hanging!!!

Huge fan of yours and would love to see you update soon. I love that you are grammatically on top of your game and you use very descriptive words so that the reader is not left wondering just what the heck the author is talking about. Kudos!!

wow wasnt expecting that to happen,
but i cant wait for you to update
i really like this story
im into it and i cant wait to see how they develop :)
hope u update soon

ohhhhhhhhhh yes FUCK YOU GRIFFIN!!!
ARGH
ARGHHGHGHGHG
ARGHGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
kill me now.

alright. i want sera to never talk to him ever again (though i know that you, the author, wouldn't allow that, one can only dream :( )

*sigh*
but yes. very realistic what both parties would have said. but agreed. i hate griffin again. (as a loyal reader would). end of story! may he rot in the depths of hell!!!!!!

that was SO uncalled for, that he make the first move and then go, i dont like u like that. like effffff WHATEVER. keep talking while i'm walking away!

Had to check the calendar and see if it was my birthday--two chapters at once!! yeah! I enjoyed the differences in their apartments. it was great seeing how one views the other. There was also something so humanizing about him being claustrophobic. It's how you bring your characters to life and why they are so enjoyable. I can't wait to see how their relationship changes now that he's asked her to leave and made her feel like a giant slut. It takes a strong person to end a passionate moment. I think he did the right thing, but I probably wouldn't be so understanding if I was Sera. Can't wait for the next update.